Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
The 20th and 21st centuries are characterized by all the momentous changes they made in human's life. Perhaps the most important milestone of these changes is about expanding businesses. In the distinctive civilized societies, one of the most perplexing questions among individuals is whether companies utilize advertisements to display their products much better than they are or not, through which numerous controversies have been engendered. A plethora of people is in the conviction that more often than not, advertisements are presenting products much better than they really are, while others take a radically diverse viewpoint. Although both attitudes have their own merits and drawbacks, I postulate that the former attitude seems more realistic. The ensuing paragraphs will shed light on my perspective.
First and foremost, the first goal of every company is to make profit. It is understood that every company tries to sell more products to gain better profit. In approaching this issue, one needs only refer to the exceedingly number of TV commercials. To attain higher profit, companies utilize every opportunity such as advertisements. A noteworthy refreshingly statistics, in my country, revealed by recent social research, show that most companies dedicate up to 20 percent of their budget to advertising.
In addition to making profit, people are inclined toward the idea that fancier advertisements are representing a better product. Not only do people trust the fancier advertisements but also they make their shopping decisions based on them. As a case in point, after Samsung Company used "Rita Ora", a popular singer and model of United States, in its commercials, everyone in Iran was talking about the commercial. From my personal experience, I can tell that most of my friends changed their cell phones, and bought a Galaxy because they were assuming that it has a better quality.
Apart from the points that I made above, there is also another reason that needs some words here, and that is one only need to take into account this subtle point meticulously that most of the companies sign contracts with advertisement companies in order to make an appropriate advertisement; consequently, increase their selling of their products. In fact, advertising companies apply any method needed to sell that particular product; otherwise, not only would they not gain any profit, but also they would lose their credit among companies. Therefore, they try every method such as using a celebrity in their advertisements, lying about the features of the products, or making their products seem more essential than they really are.
By way of conclusion, on the grounds of the aforementioned arguments, I am of the opinion that advertisements tend to represent a better image of products due to the fact that companies need to sell their products. Besides, people are attracted toward the fancier products. Moreover, advertisement companies use diverse strategies to attract more customers.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'apart from', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as', 'talking about']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242481203008 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.156015037594 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0770676691729 0.0866891130778 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.062030075188 0.046263068375 134% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0601503759398 0.0685040099705 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125939849624 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0375939849624 0.0351676179071 107% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.05272349922 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0300751879699 0.0309702414327 97% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0883458646617 0.0887237588012 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00751879699248 0.0209618222197 36% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00751879699248 0.0139019557991 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3022.0 2387.08602151 127% => OK
No of words: 472.0 408.028673835 116% => OK
Chars per words: 6.40254237288 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.391949152542 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.307203389831 0.251872472559 122% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.228813559322 0.174417080927 131% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.177966101695 0.112833075102 158% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05272349922 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 64.991797187 59.2087087015 110% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.4761904762 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5353616163 48.84282405 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.904761905 120.699889404 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4761904762 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.761904761905 0.644075263715 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 53.1965294592 45.7405998639 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.45945945946 1.45489161554 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258145259786 0.300154397459 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0971601759226 0.103427244359 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0791664084271 0.0752933317313 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.495144968959 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135164440726 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978375735378 0.114077575197 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845580193105 0.0781384742642 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.310280893331 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0612506130114 0.067059652881 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170466630912 0.210909579961 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732769859555 0.0618886996521 118% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.