Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many people believe that parents nowadays more involved in their children's eduction than parents were in the past. I agree with this general believe. In this essay, I will address two reasons why I feel this way.
First of all, in today's world education is regarded as the most valuable asset in one's life. Thus, parents are more involved in their children's eduction so that they can make sure that they are having the best education. My experience is a compelling example of this. My parents are also want to see me successful in my life and that is why they do their best to make sure that I am having the best education. For instance, they sent to the good tutor to prepare for the admission test for the best school in my city and I eventually cracked the exam and admitted in that prestigious school.
Secondly, parents in this generation are more educated than parents were in the past. Thus, they know which path of studies would more beneficial for their children. For example, after my graduation I did not know which track would be suitable for me. Then my father told me that in the upcoming days computer science is going to have a major impact in the society and all the industries will shift towards that area. That is why I choose computer science as my field of study and done my bachelors in that. I am really very happy that I have chosen that field.
In conclusion, I strongly believe the involvement of the parents are very helpful for their children. this is because, nowadays parents know that education is the most important asset in today's world and that is why they involve themselves in their children's studies to make sure that they are doing well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62790697674 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38644605593 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475083056478 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2835529016 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0625 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260287417864 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101890625393 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112482989528 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19182345702 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689088994982 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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