Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many people wonder whether it is important to keep their old friends or to make new friends. In my opinion, it is best to keep your old friends and make better relationship with them. There are two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, if you keep your old friends it would be beneficial in the long run. Since it takes a good amount of time to build a new friendship, if you make new friends more often, you will not have any close friend, who will stand beside you. For example, my uncle has few friends from his childhood and they have a great friendship with each other. Although, he has some friends in the company in which he works for, he always calls his childhood friends whenever he needs some help. And they are also always there to help out my uncle in any situation and my uncle also do the same to them. Thus, this example demonstrates that having old friends is really beneficial to lead a happy life.
Secondly, if you keep the old friends you would be more comfortable around them. The old friends are the one with whom you can share all your stories and experiences even if it is an embarrassing one, since you know you can trust them. If you make new friends very often, you will not have anyone with whom you will comfortable with. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. In my school-days, I have a few friends whom I knew from my childhood. As the years passed by, our friendship grew stronger and there was an intimate bond between us. We shared all our stories with each other and we felt comfortable around each other and it was a good time. But after my graduation, I joined the college far from my home and I made new friends there. But I did not feel that bonding with them that I used to have with my school friends. As a result, I was uncomfortable around them and I always hesitate before I talk to them. Therefore, I think old friends are really the best people to have in one's life.
Lastly, old friends are the one with whom you can have the most amazing times. For example, whenever I go to my home after the semester break, I meet my old friends and I have some amazing moments with them. Usually, we plan to check out varieties of restaurants or we watch movies together and have fun. Thus, old friends can really enrich your life.
In conclusion, I believe that it is more important to keep the old friends and to keep a better relationship with them than to make new friends often. This is because, in the long run the old friends would be the ones who would stand beside you in any situation and you feel more comfortable around them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1004, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s are really the best people to have in ones life. Lastly, old friends are the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, you know, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 86.0 43.0788530466 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39795918367 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36746656981 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.402040816327 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9663519388 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8846153846 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 11.8709677419 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322647844056 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109076842943 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884637059272 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232444140747 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612159272333 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.14 8.01818996416 77% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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