Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing sports can teach people lessons about life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Life is a maze and no one is born with a manual. There are many lessons fo better life in everything, happenings as well as circumstances. Thus, one should look at everything carefully to take valuable lessons in order to enrich his life. Some people believe that the advantages of playing sport are limited to be an entertainment industry and to enhance public health. But, I would argue that playing sports could be a beneficial class to teach people competition rules and teamwork skills.
First off, life is full of competitions, different situations in which there are winners and losers, for instance: exams, getting jobs, businesses, etc. Playing sports is a great maneuver to learn how to determine goals, work hard, play fair, overcome disappointment, respect other competitors, go out of someone’s comfort zone, think out of the box. In sports, one will learn that hard work finally does yield results, although he may not always win. “Winning is not everything” is an essential lesson for life, there are more significant values like healthy competitions and targeted endeavor. Besides, a leading lesson from playing sports is that everyone’s real rival is himself. Many movies are made about athletes demonstrating how they could achieve success by surpassing their old selves.
Secondly, nowadays teamwork is an integral part of social life and playing group sport is the best way of learning teamwork skills. In group sports, one should be flexible and respect others opinions even if he opposes. Therefore, involving controversial situations in a sports team could be a great exercise for people to learn how to deal with the analogous circumstances in real life. On the other hand, you have to listen to your team coach to succeed. A team with great players could not be successful, unless it has a skilled instructor, the same holds true real life. Everyone in every aspect of life should consult with experts and follow their advice so as to have better choices and personal function.
All in all, The lesson through sport is extended to real life, lessons like competition rules, teamwork skills, accountability, etc. Therefore, it is highly recommended that parents consider playing sports not only as a recreation activity but also a great upbringing method.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 660, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17962466488 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94528639659 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587131367292 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3834554512 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.684210526 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.68421052632 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224543299483 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689281084654 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347090494304 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14135422988 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339285940546 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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