Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The world is full of complexity because an intricate network is connected with us. The disruption of one thread affects the rest of the thread. Our life is full of busyness where doing one work after another is always ready. Doing work in a discreet way is possible to work few than doing a lot at a time is the given statement- with this someone would agree, others are probably not. In my view, the selective choice is a positive impacts in our society because of the following two important reason.
The main reason is that some kinds of job especially in education is almost impossible to work properly by taking many schedules. When, a teacher is doing a selective work then he gives enough time behind his works. But, if the same teacher doing teaching, research, seminar, speech delivery at the same day then his productivity is down. For example, during my university time, I was doing work as a research assistant. We have two groups of team, in one group they were doing both research and teaching. In another group, we were doing only research related works. For this reason, at the end of the year it was found our group had many publications than our former group. The reason was, we were contemplating our time only for research that was the determiner of our productivity. Apart from that, another group were more busy to maintained different task at a time that down their productivity. As you can see that, single work is more productive than double or triple work at a time.
Another reason is that, to run a particular job the best men should assigned on this task. Think about the government organization where every post is distinct and this position is created by the particular qualification required on this post. Then, if one personnel wants to become expert in every post then the mess is arises. The similar kinds of phenomenon also presents in every areas of our world either flora or fauna. To be more specific, in a bee hives where particular bee is responsible for collecting foods and rearing. Moreover, they follow a strict strictures that shows their pristine and excellent life styles. They did not interfere another roles. This experience taught me that the propriety is exist when routine is balanced but when one doing to violates other works then imbalance arises.
In conclusion, it is possible to argue by delineating the chance of ambidextrousness but such caliber is rare and they do not fit in long run. The wariness and routine behavior not only enhance productivity but also helps to produce an ecological balance world. So, we should not pay attention to every jobs or roles at a time rather doing our single part wholeheartedly is more considerable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a discreet way" with adverb for "discreet"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ter another is always ready. Doing work in a discreet way is possible to work few than doing a lo...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...work properly by taking many schedules. When, a teacher is doing a selective work th...
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Line 6, column 564, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'stricture'?
Suggestion: stricture
...rearing. Moreover, they follow a strict strictures that shows their pristine and excellent...
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Line 6, column 714, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...erience taught me that the propriety is exist when routine is balanced but when one d...
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Line 6, column 767, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'violate'.
Suggestion: violate
...utine is balanced but when one doing to violates other works then imbalance arises. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2244.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8051391863 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69605308313 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531049250535 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1691912122 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.3076923077 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9615384615 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26923076923 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183606407702 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051652849925 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415971394964 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118638303903 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463543829673 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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