Do you agree or disagree with the following statements？ Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I believe that although we cannot decide what kinds of family we are born, there is one thing that’s always fair to everyone, that is, time. From successful examples we can see that to succeed in certain fields require a tremendous amount of effort, which includes a huge amount of time without a doubt. There’s always 24 hours a day for everyone to utilize; therefore, I believe that it’s impossible to do everything well given that everyone shares this limitation.
To start off, I want to use an example of myself. As a student, the most common situation that pushes us to perform various tasks and to perform well at the same time is preparing for exams. End-of-year exams of different subjects usually comes in a roll, and from my experience, there’s no short-cuts to prepare so many subjects at once other than really spending the time to think through every problem carefully. Obviously, these effort takes time, and just like what’s mentioned in the introduction, there’s no way for people to do lots of things well when time is constrained.
The second thing worth mentioning is that while some people insist that the advances of technology allows more productivity to be achieved by a single person that wouldn’t have been possible in the past, I would argue that it’s very unlikely for machines to speed up the skills that requires physical practice. My friends for instance, has a dream to become a cook, but he struggles to achieve this goal because currently, he works in many places as a part-time employee where all he does is mundane tasks such as washing dishes instead of really specializing in cooking.
Finally, although the reason why I believe people cannot do things well when they are multitasking is mainly time, it only applies to people who concentrate when they are working. Back to my example of studying for tests, I found myself every difficult to study when my brother is playing YouTube videos loudly next to my room because my mind is simply not focused on the book. Therefore, even if I put in the time that is supposed to be sufficient for studying, my grades still don’t satisfy my expectation.
To sum up, given that time is the same for everyone, I strongly agree that people cannot to things well when they are involved in many other activities at one time because there’s simply not enough time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: THIS_NNS
Message: Did you mean 'this effort' or 'these efforts'?
Suggestion: this effort; these efforts
...ugh every problem carefully. Obviously, these effort takes time, and just like what’s mentio...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, really, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83497536946 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62586529189 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573891625616 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3494636809 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.0 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2307692308 20.6045352989 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189024405854 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689018887682 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607687462807 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106799580738 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302109945029 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 16.9 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.