Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
An Information is an important value and it could be found anywhere such as internet, library or people's mind.This the information areas are usually reachable, but some of these are not.Some of these are less valuable and others much.The Internet is the best accessible way for getting information but it sometimes causes problems.
First of all, today almost all people of world use internet in anytime and anywhere.For instance, when people go to new environments for travelling they could use their tablets or their cellphones with their gsm operators' internet for finding their ways, and they usually use it for looking interesting things which about places where they go.If a journey people do take its tools which including internet option they can take guidances, but this method is less effective because there might be not enough info.
Also, there are several different website on internet and various apps on mobile operating system's markets.Using these apps and websites gives to people online and the fastest information,and so that approach which is using these supplies to humans productivity,flexibility and functionality.
In contrast, there are few problems which caused by using internet.Especially, internet consumes people's time, because children, students or other use it alot.Time is important as like as information, but if people use time effectively there is not problem, however it will be problem it is not used positively.Some kind of people use internet much more than other such as student,due to using it they could be fail on their lessons, educations too.Some of today's children playing internet games,that causes negative social behaviours than traditional type of playing games.
In my opinion, although there are a few disadvantages and negative impacts it is necessary, and people should use it productively, for efficient using people can use schedule in their time, they should divide time to different parts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, for instance, in contrast, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43278688525 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14974990796 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567213114754 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.1344086022 303% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.312451809 48.9658058833 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 331.4 100.406767564 330% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.0 20.6045352989 296% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.6 5.45110844103 415% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234093679713 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125049604507 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334240474808 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125049604507 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334240474808 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.6 11.7677419355 294% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.1 58.1214874552 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 10.1575268817 279% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 10.9000537634 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.91 8.01818996416 136% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.0537634409 263% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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