Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems
The internet is a great invention of tha last century that almost everyone derive a lot of benefits from it. Though some argue the global web provides a plethora of information which may cause serious problems, I firmly believe that it gives us much more advantages than shortcomings. The internet prevent us from wasting time on mindless tasks and get the access for the information to every person on the Earth.
First, the internet helps people to save their time instead of implementing unnecessary or routine job. this is fruitful for both daily life and work. there is all information in the global network, so a person should just get profits from it. For example, my sister Masha managed to find a perfect life-work balance thanks to the internet. Now she is a freelancer in a big international company L'Oreal who is responsible for beauty market analysis. Thus, Masha collect all data through the web, than online programs proсess it and, finally, she send the report via e-mail while staying at home with her children. due to the worldwide network my sister has understood that in this world there was nothing impossible.
Next, the web makes the information accessible for everyone. Since the gap of education between different social groups grows, people may narrow it thanks trough the advantages provided by the internet. For instance, I was born in a little town in the middle of nowhere where the education has never been the main concern for the authorities. Despite the absence of money and low quality courses at school, I succeeded to enter on of the most illustrious university in Russia, the Moscow State Institute of international relations. If it had not been for the online courses and open sources which help the youth to prepare the entering exams, I would have never coped on my own.
From all I have argued above, the web is essential today and facilitates our life. The data which could be found due to the internet gives everyone possibility to enrich himself and to save his time to spend it more rationally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: This
...mplementing unnecessary or routine job. this is fruitful for both daily life and wor...
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Suggestion: There
... fruitful for both daily life and work. there is all information in the global networ...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sends'.
Suggestion: sends
...e programs proсess it and, finally, she send the report via e-mail while staying at ...
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Suggestion: Due
...hile staying at home with her children. due to the worldwide network my sister has ...
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Message: Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
...courses at school, I succeeded to enter on of the most illustrious university in R...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87679083095 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6572776093 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598853868195 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9356585135 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.117647059 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126106847576 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375107161099 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373965232638 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706220115064 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385135679931 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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