Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students do not respect teachers as much as they did in the past.
In today's moddern world, with galloping progress in technology and science, the interaction between the children and their teachers plays a pivotal role in everyone's life. Since students learn from their instructors how to progress and how to gain knowlege.w
While some hold the opinion that students do respect teacers as much as they did in the past, I personally believe that children do not appreciate their teacher like before. I feel this ways for two conspicuous reasons which are pinpointed in the following.
To begin with, due to fact progress of science and the advent of high technology device such as computer, internet, smartphone, to name but a few,the significance of the teachers are not as much as before. Since in the past, near five decades before, teachers were the only source for gaining information and knowledge. However, now, thanks to such state of the art technology, students can easily type a keyword on the google search engine and find quite a few up to date information about that topic. Let's make a comparison between my school period and my parents. My father told me the only source for questioning about the science were their teachers. My father and his classmate were really occount on their teachers's knowledge and thought they were very resourceful, since that time, in many families, unfortunately, there were not a literate parents and the society suffered from ilitracy. on the other hands, when i was high school, forunately, my parents were graduated and had a ph.d degree. Not only are Internet, but also my parents good source for asking my curious question. Hence, I, in comparison to my parents, did not appreciate the value of my teachers. Since, there were some good resource which i can refer to.
Another paramount point which should take in to consideration is that, in the past, especially in my country, there was no written rule or instruction for teachers' methods or behaviour in the class. yet, today, we have obsereved that educational and training organisation, published an instructor for instructors which shows how teachers should behave in the class. In this insructor, not only teachers prohibited from physical punishment, but also they should treat with the children in a kindness and with curtious, so that they remain positive effect on their deed too. In contrast, teachers used to punish students physiscally, , especially when children behaved in rude and incourteous manner.
in conclusion, by taking account all the above reasons and many others, I strongly believe that children do not appreciate the value of their children in as much as before, due to existance some resources which they can refer to, and the instructor which teachers are required to follow.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, really, so, while, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2294.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08647450111 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76863183989 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 698.4 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 4.94265232975 324% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.2888256361 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.444444444 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0555555556 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208754447657 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580976059636 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751279878796 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143137475526 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907353678789 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.