Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In today's modern world, with its galloping progress in technology, having good friends is a gift; in other wordsfriends play an important role in everyone's life, since one's can improve or face failure by his or her friends. There is a proverb in my country the equivalent of which in English may sound this: " One can be known by his or her friends." I personally believe that having long-lasting friends with small number of people have much more advantages than making more relationship. I feel this way for some reasons which are pinpointed in the following.
To begin with, nowadays, people with hectic life style really are in need to release their stress. By having strong relationship with others, one can express his or her feeling, talks about own secrets; by expressing feelings, one can get rid of stressful life and relieve individual work or even financial pressure. According to the research, scientist strongly believe that feeling and problem with others plays a pivotal role in preventing depression. By strengthening our relationship we can spend more time with our friends. hence we can have more time with each others, it leads to have more intimacy and fun.
another paramount point which should be taken in to consideration is that in current society, with its rapid progress in technology, and economic recession, individual confront many difficult problem. In this situation, they are required to have strong friendship with others in order to get help. To illusterate my point I would lile provide more information and a proverb. People in need are friends indeed. By maintain a small chain of friendship with more intimacy, we can get device from our friends, especially hard- bitten and resourceful friends, thereby improving our experience and solve our problem as soon as possible, furthuremore pave the way for our future success and prosperity.
In conclusion, by taking account all the above reasons and many others, I strongly belive that having long lasting relationships are better than making more temporary friends. Not only can they help, but they also can reduce our stress.
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..., but they also can reduce our stress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, really, so, then, i feel, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14121037464 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8236428301 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567723342939 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 4.94265232975 303% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.3539469018 48.9658058833 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.933333333 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20895284892 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786990876843 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425182878434 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135167584047 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261413089191 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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