Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students do not respect teachers as much as they did in the past.
Since the beginning of the time, human being has always strived to improve their living standards and bring more convenience to their day-to-day lives.
Throughout history, children’s education has played prominent role in all societies and all generation. today children’s have a weird way of thinking then the past; they are very different from us. they are so smart and every kid is unique. so, we can’t say that all nowadays students don’t respect teachers. Personally, I believe that the children changed and almost they do not see the world as we saw. Maybe their behaviors are different with teachers but I do not agree that their behavior lacks respect. I will explicate my point of view in 2 outstanding sentences.
First and foremost point that I would like to bring here is that the way that families treat children is very different from the past. The numbers of the kids are increase and each family has one or two children at the best. All of the attention spends on kids. Thus, in this situation children are the center of attention. I’m not saying that they are spoil or rude but from their early family treat and behavior they expect a lot of attention and patience. but it is undeniable that some children’s are rude or coddle or even unbearable. Of course, it’s not their fault, children’s are like a shiny white paper that we can write anything on. I believe that most of human’s beings behaviors are shaped in early childhood and that’s why the family role is very important and pivotal.
The second point that I want to talk about changes is the definition of morality. some people think is the most important dilemma in our history. people behaviors are completely different from their fathers. Today we do something without any fear in society that was once a big taboo. we should accept that our children’s or our next generations are very far from us. Honestly, I, as a 24 years old girl can’t understand my 15 years old cousin. l believe that the teachers have to update themselves. they should expect something that the nowadays kids can give. Or the government should try to employ the young teachers those who that don’t have a big moral gap with kids.
To wrap it up and make a long story short, I believe that today’s children’s are more intimate than the past. they grew up with digital stuff and in front of parent’s camera. they don’t have any shame and compared to the past kids they don’t suffer self-confidence. Anyway, I think we should understand them because no one wants to go back. we are in a win-win situation of history. In the most optimistic case.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, honestly, if, may, second, so, then, thus, i think, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2249.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92122538293 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85618930928 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503282275711 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9807108878 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5483870968 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7419354839 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61290322581 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129101580645 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352403469357 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050396769866 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772224744768 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688532547879 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.