Essay topics:
TPO-31- Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to
Since the beginning of time, human beings have always strived to improve their living standards and bring more convenience to their day-to-day lives.
Throughout history happiness and joy has played prominent role in all families or in all societies. human binges naturally loves to be happy and from beginning of the time he spent a lot of time for find a best happiness way. I don’t believe we can compare happiness with the scale of the time but I believe the attitude about happiness completely has changed because man has changed. we can’t say it is a bad or a good change. but it is what it is. I will explicate my point of view in 2 outstanding points.
First and foremost without any shadow of doubt humans beings n behavior have changed. what we know as evolution is chang us. we are different from our fathers and their fathers. today Lifestyle is completely different from past. Even some taboo in the past is normal now. people are more open mind and they have less mind boundaries than their ancestors’ and in my opinion it is very good change. Of course this kind of changes will influence in humans behavior and his brain function. For example in the past men have more entertainment possibility than women but today they will enjoy all kind of happiness and joy side by side and it is a good change.
The second point that I would like to bring here is with internet emergence the way we lived is completely change. people are more alone and they enjoy themselves and their unreal friends. this change has more impact in young people because now all of them addicted in their personal digital stuff. social media is one of the most addictive programs in modern life. Young’s and olds spend most of their time in social media. The family communicated increased and people just don’t want to talk with each other. they just want enjoy the fake compliment from unknown people in social media. it is very sad and tragedy change. Unfortunately the family value diminished and the member of families doesn’t enjoy spending time together. like in the past we all were happy when we gathered together in our grandparent’s house.
For wrap it up and make a long story short, every change has bad effects and good one. The change of the time is one of the most controversial changes in human binges life’s personally believe some happiness never change and we should value them. Health and family are precious no matter where we live or when we live. it is the one and only happiness in the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Human
...le in all families or in all societies. human binges naturally loves to be happy and ...
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...he time he spent a lot of time for find a best happiness way. I don't believ...
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Suggestion: We
...ly has changed because man has changed. we can't say it is a bad or a good ch...
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Suggestion: But
...pos;t say it is a bad or a good change. but it is what it is. I will explicate my p...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean: 'human beings'?
Suggestion: human beings
...nd foremost without any shadow of doubt humans beings n behavior have changed. what we know a...
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... humans beings n behavior have changed. what we know as evolution is chang us. we ar...
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Suggestion: Today
...ent from our fathers and their fathers. today Lifestyle is completely different from ...
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Suggestion: People
...n some taboo in the past is normal now. people are more open mind and they have less m...
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...mergence the way we lived is completely change. people are more alone and they enjoy t...
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... the way we lived is completely change. people are more alone and they enjoy themselve...
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Suggestion: This
...oy themselves and their unreal friends. this change has more impact in young peopl...
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Suggestion:
...hemselves and their unreal friends. this change has more impact in young people b...
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...dicted in their personal digital stuff. social media is one of the most addictive prog...
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...on't want to talk with each other. they just want enjoy the fake compliment fro...
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...nt from unknown people in social media. it is very sad and tragedy change. Unfortu...
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Suggestion: Like
...sn't enjoy spending time together. like in the past we all were happy when we g...
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...o matter where we live or when we live. it is the one and only happiness in the wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, even so, for example, kind of, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74157303371 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61801128396 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494382022472 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3717858651 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7586206897 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3448275862 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86206896552 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179060557264 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466527780572 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393393303079 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977474605773 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319164963141 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.