Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on smart phone, online games, and social networking web site. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the beginning of time, human beings have strived to improve their living standard and bring more convenience to their day-to-day lives.
Throughout history education has played a prominent role in all families and societies. As technology evolved, lifestyle changed. technology progress has a direct impact on sleeping time, reading the book and even eating the food. today people read less, they sleep and wake up later and don’t have enough time for cooking books than before<span class="hiddenSpellError" pre="not "></span>. All of these changes are because of the addictive use of smart phone .I personally agree with the above sentences.
most and foremast reason that I would like to bring here is that all children in all societies and ages not like school. the government and teachers be aware of the time. they must care that what is very important for the 21-century children. From the beginning until now everything changed, the nowadays kids aren’t like children 30 or 20 years ago. they are updated, and they need that everyone who teaches them be updated. it’s government and scholars duty to encourage children to educating, like build smart schools or employ young teachers who know how use technology. In my opinion we should understand new generation and not behave as if they are like us or our fathers.
they are new generation; the most important is that they are the technology generation. this makes them completely different from previous generations.
The second point is that parent should spend more time and attention to their children behavior. this is certain that all of nowadays children use smart phone but it is important that the parents controlled them. parents should give children specific time to play. Thus, with this method children will not addicted to online games and will not past away from their own generation.
In school also as I said before, teachers must teach children the best way to use smart phone.
To wrap it up, I believe that nowadays children are so distracted and playful but what I deeply believe is that in all generations, all the adults should found the best way to communication with children. children are flexible and they are ready for learn .so, it is just necessary to find the best teaching way then they will be the best students ever because nowadays children are so smart and ready for learn.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, then, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17424242424 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01224734508 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540404040404 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.367120471 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1363636364 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 5.45110844103 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223906062975 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642209130258 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434807773881 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101660808776 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468553917302 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.