Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of taking risk and trying something new in life. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely state that the assertion is true. Even though some people believe that taking risk could destructive, it is my firm belief that successful people try new things and take risks rather than doing what they know how to do well. To support my idea, I would provide two major reasons, and I will develop these idea in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, I think successful people like to experience new things and that is what makes them so distinguished. For instance, Steve jobs was on the most prominent people in the tech company. He always waned to try new things and he did not stop it. He was so fearless. He used to create new ideas. For example, he had an idea about some device that you could use to listen to music, read book, and play games. He designed IPod series for the apple. It was a brand new idea and no one though that this product is going to be so important in the people's life. As a result, the apple invented something unique and that could make great amount of money. I think this reason could vividly show us how much is important for stand out person to experience new things in their life.
Secondly, I think prominent people want to know more things about everything. You can see in the ancient history that a lot of scholars had understanding about so many things. For example, Kharazmi was one of the most important people of all time. He was an mathematician, astronomer, and architect. He wanted to know about every things and that helped him to become so well-known for his achievement. The history of science is full of these examples that could make us understand why these people was so effective on science and our lives.
Finally, I think when you want to learn something new you need to try so hard and that is what successful people like to do. For instance, Bill Gates is one of successful people in the technology. You can read his autobiography to understand how hard worker he was in his youth. He took his job seriously and tried so hard to achieve his goal and finally, he create new tech company which now is supper successful. This reason is one of the reasons why it is vital to take risk and learn new things in our life.
In the light of above mentioned reasons, I believe it is important for successful people to take some risk and learn new things and I think some of the critical reasons on this topic are the fact that they like to gain an experience, they are curious and they like to work hard in their idea and their thoughts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...duct is going to be so important in the peoples life. As a result, the apple invented s...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'creates'.
Suggestion: creates
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2189.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4856557377 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44328901552 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436475409836 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6983767411 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1923076923 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96153846154 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291354353745 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775170455088 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997254244314 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181058437527 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088838457987 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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