Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.
There is no shortage of opinions that successful people only do the things that they know at their best. I have a different opinion. I strongly believe that to be successful in life one should have the courage to take risks. In the following essay, I intended to put forth my points and reasons to support.
To begin with, the first exquisite point to be mentioned is any individual who is stagnant at one point never be a achiever. Moreover, life is full of risk and anyone who wants the best from life always tries new endeavors and thinks out of the box. As a result, they get introduced to new world of achievements. To exemplify, when my father started his job in a multinational company, back in the nineties, everything was fantastic and seems to be perfect. However, he is always an adventurous and passionate man who takes a huge risk.He quit the dream job of many and pursued his own import export business. Evidently, achieve his goal and now has a renowned name in commerce. Therefore, this example illustrates how taking risk is essential for one's success.
Secondly, to explain broadly, we are living in this high-tech era. Everyday we
are facing new challenges especially students are under more pressure as many new fields have been introduced. Consequently, when any student wants to switch their field of study, they get a huge repulsion from their surrounding people. Eventually, those who take a risk and change their field in accordance to the current demand of the market are now successful individuals. For instance, it is best explained by my own personal experience, after my high school I achieved a full bright scholarship for medicine. Although, it is a great going but after a year I realized that medicine is a time consuming field.So, I quit it and made my path towards I.T. Now, I am a successful Software developer and making a decent income in less span of time. Thus, this experience taught me that if I have not switched my field then I will be still studying and going through a difficult time.
In conclusion, I certainly have a firm believe that taking challenges and risks in life will mostly be fruitful and showers success in an individual life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77690288714 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79774267923 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577427821522 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2567427606 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7894736842 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0526315789 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21052631579 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196936098587 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587818562909 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828123173334 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101067500179 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750398987172 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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