Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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Without any shadow of doubt, education is not only the inextricable part of every individual's life, but also the fabric of the society. Should people realize the importance of this element, in the passage of time, they will ponder over the influence of the teacher in the context of community much more scrupulously. Some people are inclined towards this fact that our generation respect teachers more than previous one, while others believe otherwise. I do find the idea of the former group more in accordance with that of mine. To support my stance, in the course of this essay, I will aptly initiate my viewpoints.
To begin with, it is witnessed the government push over the last few years causes promoting the quality of teachers life. There has been some concerned about this issue among the governer, thus this has brought about teachers in the center of attention. Increasing their salary, providing opportunities for their welfare and giving some privilege for their children's education are the results of this change compared with past on behalf of the government. As an example, both my parent are teacher, it has been sensed the differences of concentration in their life. Both the healthy centers and recreational centers have discount for them.
Another reason which deserves to say some words here is that, recently people have been more aware of the profound role of their children's teacher, thus they respect them much more than before. Hardly can anyone deny the influence of teachers on the headway of young adults who will be the next generation of our community. To illustrate my point, I would like to mention some statistics results. The results of the survey which conducted recently in my country, depict that most of the parents invite their children's teacher to their family party. That is, they count the teachers as their family members, or even higher than. These results easily depict the priority and importance of teachers among our generation.
In brief, by contemplating the aforementioned facts, one soon realizes that teachers have more respect among the people rather than before. Since, I strongly subscribe to the perspective that people appreciate teachers than before.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...not only the inextricable part of every individuals life, but also the fabric of the societ...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ct among the people rather than before. Since, I strongly subscribe to the perspectiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, while, in brief, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13812154696 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63236333194 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546961325967 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8887341377 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05555555556 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147254973429 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500206616582 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385329251304 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967431199434 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240969992434 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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