Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teachers should have an array of interpersonal skills that would help them to teach well. It is known that some teachers share their social or political views with their students, which I think is not a good idea. This is because this behavior might affect the trust between teachers and students, make the class less enjoyable, and teachers might lose their jobs.
Teachers' political or social views might not be the same with some of their students. This will cause some kind of inconvenience between them and might, sometimes, lead to losing the trust between them. Students, as a result, would cast doubt on all information that their teachers share with them. Thus, the pros of letting students know about their teachers' political or social views are weighed less than crons.
Moreover, students might not enjoy the class when their teachers talk about their social or political beliefs. This may happen frequently with young students because politics or social events are not among their interests. This exactly what happened to me when I was in primary school. I remember one of my teachers who was always asking us about what we think about the president of Egypt at that time. To be honest, I had no idea about what he was talking about and I intentionally made some excuses to not attend his classes. The reason behind that is that I did not enjoy the class and I literally did not learn anything from these classes.
Finally, teachers might lose their jobs when they talk about politics or social events because some of the students would talk with their parents about that. As a result, some parents might report that to the principle especially when one of the parents or both of them have a conflict with the teacher’s opinion. Eventually, more and more reports would come to the school administration and this definitely would make the school let the teacher go.
All in all, I think teachers should not share their political or social opinions with their students. This is because this action could lead to unexpected results such as: destroy the trust between teachers and students, make classes less enjoyable, and receive a lot of warnings and teachers would get fired.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 96, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...about politics or social events because some of the students would talk with their parents ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, may, moreover, so, thus, well, i think, kind of, such as, talking about, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93565683646 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42740334807 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450402144772 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0347034046 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.277777778 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242552200878 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103606927967 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845570972555 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169129956339 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03609597859 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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