Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
It is generally proven that everyone with a specific work needs to encourage in their society. Moreover, as we all know, teaching is one of the important jobs in each society that every family has lots of children. Given this issue, although some people tend to believe that teachers are cherished in the past by government more than in the present, other people have an opposite idea. In my point of view, I strongly disagree with this statement because of a couple of reasons.
Firstly, as a matter of fact, if the value of teachers is forgotten in our society, it would cause be created some problems for the education of their children due to the lake of teacher's motivation. It plays a vital role in every school. For example, I remembered that when I was in high school, my mathematical teacher who always was sad because she think that teaching is a boring job. So, not only she had not motivation, but also she had not sufficient concentration for teaching to children. After this issue, the government established a ceremony in order to appreciating teachers. Also, this matter helps them to increases their motivation. Hence, all teachers need to value by society that nowadays have enough attention to teachers.
Second, it is obviously accepted that teaching to children is recognized as one of significant matters. Moreover, teachers play a direct role in the progress of students. So, they should be valued by society to provide an apt ground for achieve to their goal. For example, our school had a plan for our teachers in order to improve condition of their student. In particular, if the average score of all students increased till 17, they could receive some gifts. Therefore, although, the school needed to spend some money for buying some gift, it received some money from government owing to it award of teachers’ value in society.
From what have been discussed above, we may safely reach the conclusion that these days teachers were valued by society more than in the past. All in all, the government would like to spend much time and cost to provide an appropriate condition for teacher in order to increase their motivation and improve their approaches.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'need'?
Suggestion: need
...oven that everyone with a specific work needs to encourage in their society. Moreover...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atement because of a couple of reasons. Firstly, as a matter of fact, if the val...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
... teacher who always was sad because she think that teaching is a boring job. So, not ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ays have enough attention to teachers. Second, it is obviously accepted that te...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, in particular, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90591397849 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69833964227 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524193548387 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6724300701 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0526315789 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5789473684 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191792781898 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561631737961 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603360702288 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125644196412 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406392699199 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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