Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

There are not enough evidences for teachers were more appreciated in the past than in this time today. I do not agree this matter.
First, teachers are an important for all societies and they are a part of an education. I think they are the most part of the education, and They always interested in their students, and sometimes student's parents too. When students need to explains any definition there would be their teacher. Some of all student's parents sometimes need helping to their offspring problems, but they do not know what do they do. While they do help their young teachers are always be there. So the families always appreciate them.
In addition, when i think choosing a job it would be the teacher. Because it is valued by a big and developed countries. This countries usually give much money to them, and they received any other awards from a management of places where they work. Some families offers to them gift for their efforts.
Furtermore, some big cities communities get a member who is the teacher. Because teachers have good kind of behaviours about leading conclusions. This shows us the value which is given to them.
In my opinions, taking account of all these reasons i do not aggre this situation. There are much evidiences for positive values are given to teacher than negative approaches.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, while, i think, in addition, kind of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 227.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85022026432 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58210664739 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568281938326 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 618.680645161 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3055730024 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.7647058824 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3529411765 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231283247969 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751524093575 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500664305578 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133669627874 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605671237705 0.0645574589148 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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