Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

Now a days, knowing different languages are necessary so all people should learn language that they don't know.
first, we have to use different language on education in a university or a high schools. For example english. All kind of materials are written with this. There are a lot of different english book on science, literature, phycology, mathematics , etc. All universities use these materials. if the person is a computer programmer, he or she must know syntax which is formulated with english. Also if people go other countries they must learn language which is used visiting countries or english language because it is a world language.
Another example is latin language, health is important , and it is leaded by doctors and latin languages books. if the person want to make doctors title he or she have to know latin language. there are a lot of latin words in health literatures.
finally , learning is starts when children starts school, in that times learning abilities better than later, children wonder new issues, languages, and they have productive and effective brain functions. so , if people would like to learn foreign language they should start first year in school life.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, for example, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 30.3222958057 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 1373.03311258 73% => OK
No of words: 196.0 270.72406181 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09693877551 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72098787208 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59693877551 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 419.366225166 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5074912843 49.2860985944 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8461538462 110.228320801 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 21.698381199 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.06452816374 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 4.19205298013 477% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238018185685 0.272083759551 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077392726671 0.0996497079465 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711750207092 0.0662205650399 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141673371326 0.162205337803 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844106513216 0.0443174109184 190% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 63.6247240618 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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