Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the development of a students, teachers are definitely the ones who have the most vital influence. Not only the knowledge they impart assists students get employed in the labor market, but also the brilliant qualities they demonstrate benefit the younger generation in the long run. Therefore, it is never too much to show respect for our mentors. However, whether they are less appreciated nowadays is under heated discussion recently. Personally, I firmly hold teachers are more admired in contemporary society through versatile methods.
To begin with, someone who believe more appreciation was given to teachers in ancient times claim that there are countless old stories where students show admiration to their teachers. Admittedly, the deeds described in the folktales are touching. However, nobody can assure the accuracy of those stories. What is more, even though they are authentic, only good values will be recorded by historians while the evil ones will disappear as time goes by. Therefore, there is selection bias and the argument that teachers are more appreciated before are indefensible.
In addition, despite there are quantities of moving stories where students show appreciation for their beloved mentor nowadays, those deeds are likely to be ignored with the advancement of social media. Firstly, the public tend to be curious and pay more attention to news with evil contents. Whenever there is a student who insults or who just does not copy the instructions as his/her teacher told, he/she will be immediately covered by the press. Therefore, we are inclined to be surrounded by those bed news instead of good deeds. What is more, since the technology is so advanced that every detail from every corner of the world can be transported in front of us within a second. Thousands of coverage about the private lives of celebrities or tons of update news about politic relationship between two countries is extremely attractive. As a result, it is hard for us to pay attention to good deeds of a respective students which seem ordinary.
At last, there are various new methods to express admiration and thankfulness towards our teacher nowadays. Colorful thank-you notes are sent through email on Teacher's day, warm regards are transmitted to teachers by instant communication applications whenever a student thinks of his/her mentor. Although some students may raise different opinions with their teachers regarding a same topic, it is more improvement of equality rather than irrespective. Also, the whole society appreciate teachers more. Higher salary are paid to teachers and they can get higher credit scores in the bank.
In conclusion, I firmly hold that student respect their teachers more in contemporary age than in old days.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
When it comes to the development of a students, teachers are definitely the ones who h...
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Line 9, column 922, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'student'?
Suggestion: student
...attention to good deeds of a respective students which seem ordinary. At last, ther...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2350.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29279279279 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82551665279 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56981981982 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 734.4 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6170430363 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.173913043 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3043478261 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95652173913 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204634641925 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596566743838 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491471745347 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120058201525 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371573654144 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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