Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Advertisement is a very popular way to promote the product and also play some negative impact on the children's mind. However, some people think that the company should not allow any kind of advertisement that directly affects the children because they have no enough knowledge but some people think that differently. Not surprisingly, the number of the issue over this controversies is overwhelmed. personally I prefer television should not allow this kind of advertisement and I will
elaborate on the followings.
First and foremost, Television advertisement is very popular and also create a mental impact on the children's mind. Kids easily convinced with it and try to achieve the product in any situation. For particulars, I have a niece who is very attracted to the TV. When she has watched a new product on the television like a doll, chocolate, Ice-cream she always wanted it unless it is a good or bad product. Sometimes she was so stubborn that she started crying in front of the public. Moreover, watching excessive television creates a health problem like mental growth and eye problem. Recently, I observed that my niece trying to imitate the cartoon character like changing the physical gesture. As a result, when she grows it will impact her on physical growth and also mental. Thus, advertisement actually creates mental, health and emotional impact on the children's mind.
Furthermore, children do not have enough knowledge about the advertisement and the product. So, I think the company advertiser group should make an advertisement with the age range. As a result, it will not harmful to their health as well as mental growth. For instance, when advertisement is made for the age of 2 to 5 it should be educational, influential instead of fascinating. Thus, children also get motivated and also learn morality, loyalty etc. We can take the example of Meana Cartoon which is so popular in Asia also produce this cartoon in various language. The focus of this cartoon is mainly raised awareness to the ordinary people such as the importance of girl's education, the impact of early marriage of girl's, sanitary problem in village etc. This promotional cartoon was accepted by the public and also develop children's mental growth.
To recapitulate, advertising is essential for the promotion of the product but if this advertisement is created in the wrong way it will make a negative impact on the children. Thus, the company always aware of it and try to focus on productive and educational background.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, i think, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2124.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11807228916 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95895372908 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472289156627 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3388276775 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.347826087 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0434782609 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26086956522 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140514216408 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447571091417 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046000909844 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738194554357 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472805143566 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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