Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friendship plays an important role in our life. We are always experiencing new friends and the friends that we knew a long time ago. They really spice up our life and bring us feeling of joys. One controversial question relating to friendship is if maintaining old friends could bring more happiness or making new friends is better for us to live happily. In my perspective, making new friends is more essential and rewarding, though keep in touch with old friends can feel enjoyable and nostalgic.
My first reason is that making new friends broaden connection with a wide range of people. Nowadays, there are many jobs relevant to interpersonal skill. Making new friends not only helps to improve the skill, but also increase customer resources that can be used in the future. For example, in the jobs of marketing, flourishing your customer members group means you can sell more product to a large number of people. By doing this, you’ll gain more money which improves your standard of life and offers you happiness at the same time. Also, having more friends is beneficial due to the fact that you can get help from your friends easily. Because different friends have different professions, they can help us to solve problems in various ways.
Besides, New friends can share more things which help to widen our vision. As we talking to more and more people, we will get much more knowledge about different fields that we never knew before. Also, sharing stories about experiences with each other is entertaining. By communicating with new friends, we accumulate a lot of interesting stories that we can retell when we meet other people. Therefore, making new friends not only broaden our knowledge but enrich our mind as well.
Finally, our life is uncertain and ever-changing. We cannot guarantee that we’ll stay in the same place or be with the same group of people all the time. For instance, when we finish our high school or university, we might move to another city or even another country for a better job or a target school. During this process, we probably lose contact with our old friends due to the distance and work. Furthermore, being friends with someone for a long period can be exhausting. Seeking for some new faces will really help to get rid of the tiredness of repeatedly seeing the same person.
In summary, although maintaining friendship with some old friends is great, making new friends will provide us with happiness since they not only broaden our horizon and improve our social life. Thus, It is significant to make new friends,.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...roup means you can sell more product to a large number of people. By doing this, you'll gain...
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Line 9, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...s, It is significant to make new friends,.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2150.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91990846682 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62908049739 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505720823799 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.226098372 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.48 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291602997033 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900610686199 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05645475059 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186287257281 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534559395059 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.