Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Regarding the issue of whether the best way for a trip is in a group led by a tour guide, different people hold divergent opinions. Some would maintain the standpoint that travelling in a group is better because the prices is always lower than having a trip without it. I partly agree with their notions. However, from my point of view, I attach great importance for that travelling without a group can be the best way.
Firstly, travelling by yourself or with some friends can have more leisure time to spend on shopping, sightseeing and eating. As a person who have travelled a lot, I will tell you about what the tour guide trip seems like. The worst of all, you nearly have no individual time to relax yourself, let alone go shopping or have a look on the sites where is not arranged on the trip schedule. You may not believe sometimes you have to ask the guide's opinion even when you need go to toilets. Consider one experience which can shed some light on this issue. I was accompanied with a big group of people on the trip to Tibet, which has the highest altitude in China. There are numerous spectacular scenes and evaluated traditional customs to explore there because of the unique geological features. Notheless, every time when I escape from crowed and explored what the really interesting things, the guide would stopped me and persuaded me to come back. Finally, I could just exit and finish my own rest of trip.
Secondly, some flaws of tour agencies can destroy the joy of your trip totally. What I really want to say, as you could have imagined, is compelling shopping. This problem has laid out for a long time in China, even the most prestigious travel agency are exploited with this issue. They use a low price to attract people to register for their travel program, and during the trip, you can never escape from shopping in the specific stores which have some relationship with the agency. So you are pushed to buy what you don't need. According to a survey of travel agency in China, there were over 400 billion complaints about the compelling shopping by the travellers. From this statue, you can imagine how disturbing it can be to ruin a whole trip.
It is undeniable that someone contends that going to a place in groups led by a tour guide can be convenient and cheaper because they are already arranged to do the specific things. However, in my opinion, the most factor for a trip is exploring the world and benefiting yourself. If you are always live the arrangement made by others, you will never discover something useful for yourself.
To sum up ,whereas there is an argument for the best way of travelling in a group led by a tour guide, namely cheaper and more convenient, having your own time on shopping and sightseeing, coupled with good emotions without compelling shopping, makes a strong case for the best way to travel in a group led by no tour guide.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'believe'.
Suggestion: sometimes believe
...anged on the trip schedule. You may not believe sometimes you have to ask the guides opinion even...
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Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'guides'' or 'guide's'?
Suggestion: guides'; guide's
...t believe sometimes you have to ask the guides opinion even when you need go to toilet...
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Line 3, column 907, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'stop'
Suggestion: stop
...lly interesting things, the guide would stopped me and persuaded me to come back. Final...
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Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ency. So you are pushed to buy what you dont need. According to a survey of travel a...
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Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ething useful for yourself. To sum up ,whereas there is an argument for the bes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2390.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 516.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63178294574 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51112242497 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492248062016 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7912384818 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5833333333 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251975474456 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715524660182 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686933072929 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173650452723 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795129582459 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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