Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Rules have always been an essential part of the society since they are the reasons of their formations. Rules are necessary to maintain order in a society and keeps them turn into a chaos. As far as I am considered, by pass of time rules have became more fair and as a result now a days they are not stricting at all so every one including youngers should follow them.
First and foremost, Rules force youngers to act properly and prevents them to do any mistakes and turning into delinquents. While youngers like to at least try drugs which is the begining of their problems this will help them to maintain a healthy life and not to use drugs since they fear of law and its consequences. My personal example is a compelling example of this. I have friend whose name is Billy and when we were younger we both wanted to smoke weed which is kind of norchatic. I was always afraid of law since if police would have found out about it, the would have confined us. While I never used any drugs, Billy did but after five years he is now an addict but I still I have my healthy life. Albeit rules did not had any effect on him, I owe my life to these rules.
Another point one should consider to account this significant is rules can assure individuals safety as rules force people not to intervene whithin other's private life. As a result while people have their own freedom at the same time they behave respectfully. For example, in nigeria there is no rule about rape and the existing ones are not effective so women in the society are always afraid of rapists. At the same time rules in London are strict in this regard and rapists would face the highest possible sentence and consequently according to statistics released by "daily London" magazine, women live in a more safer environment than those who live in Nigeria. So rules helps people to live in a safer environment.
The last but not the least is rules helps youngers to be more prosperous in their life since sometimes does who are more experienced can act on their behalf. An instance of this is a rule wich is only found in Iran. Those girls who live in Iran have to asks their fathers permission to marry. So fathers have the ability to prevent a marriage. While some might say this is not correct, as fathers are more experienced, they can see what might happen in the future before hand and makes sure the daughter gets married to a good person. So they would have a happy life.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons and examples advocate the fact that while rules might be strict, they also are good for them since they are the reasons of their healthy and their happiness. Also at the same time it assures individual's safety.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... considered, by pass of time rules have became more fair and as a result now a days th...
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Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...s have became more fair and as a result now a days they are not stricting at all so every ...
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Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ve became more fair and as a result now a days they are not stricting at all so every ...
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Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'friended'.
Suggestion: friended
...is a compelling example of this. I have friend whose name is Billy and when we were yo...
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Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had found'?
Suggestion: had found
...as always afraid of law since if police would have found out about it, the would have confined u...
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Line 5, column 729, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...e my healthy life. Albeit rules did not had any effect on him, I owe my life to the...
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Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... intervene whithin others private life. As a result while people have their own fr...
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Line 9, column 623, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
... London' magazine, women live in a more safer environment than those who live in Nige...
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Line 13, column 254, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'ask'.
Suggestion: ask
...n. Those girls who live in Iran have to asks their fathers permission to marry. So f...
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Line 13, column 465, Rule ID: BEFORE_HAND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beforehand'?
Suggestion: beforehand
...can see what might happen in the future before hand and makes sure the daughter gets marrie...
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Line 17, column 201, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...s of their healthy and their happiness. Also at the same time it assures individuals...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, still, while, at least, for example, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2233.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52941176471 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42329253877 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488843813387 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 729.9 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4338442217 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0869565217 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4347826087 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21739130435 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113217521969 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370207758075 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343336409785 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749711233879 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389874574941 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.