Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
People desire a joyful, full of happiness life despite their age. However, it seems to me that young people have a privilege and they do enjoy their life more intensively than older ones. In this essay, some of the reasons supporting this statement will be discussed.
To begin with, aging is always accompanied by responsibilities. People in their young time do not have to take care and worry about family issues and problems such as financial situation, children care and daily conventional duties including bills, university fees, and other expenses. Young people have their parents to take care of them and deal with family challenges. Thus, the young ones have enough time to enjoy their life without worrying about the daily routine configuration.
Furthermore, youth is characterized by energy and passion. Young people are boiling to live and explore the world with all their senses. They have more enthusiasm and curiosity to try new things and experiment themselves without hesitations and fears for potential negative consequences of their actions. Therefore, without restrictions and barriers in their mind, they are ready to live to the maximum and enjoy life as much as it is possible. On contrary, older people do not generally behave unprompted but they always consider the advantages and drawbacks of their actions, a mindset that slows down the rhythm of their life.
Moreover, as people aging it is not just the responsibilities that increase but also health deteriorates. Older people do not have always the energy and welfare of the young ones. There are many examples that people, as they are getting older, have to face and cope with many health problems such as diabetes, blood pressure. These are stressful situations for the older individuals who are not often able to enjoy even their favorite food because it would damage their health.
To sum up, taking into account all things have been spoken above it could be concluded that life is more flourished for everyone in their young times because being young gives you the privilege to enjoy and feel the life to the maximum without limits and worries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10826210826 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66712624184 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524216524217 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3836117087 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.470588235 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338916275016 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119254186455 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966193608306 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208276612452 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639347641431 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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