Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Children are our future and whatever adults are doing, they do it with thinking of how it is going to affect their kids at a later time. Personally, I think that the youth has a crucial impact on decisions made by the older generation. There are a few reasons why I hold this stance.
First of all, contemporary teenagers are more knowledgeable in technology, which is the hallmark of the modern business. These days, every business setting equipped with computers and people who can operate them easily is the most valuable employees, whom hirers listen to when it comes to changes in the work routine. My niece`s experience is a compelling example of this. She is going to become a doctor when she graduates the high school and also, she has a passion for computers and other technological devices. Moreover, she is already a well-respected employee in a company, which elaborates websites. Since in her young age, the girl is a seasoned computer user, her supervisor, who is much older, asks her for advice when he is looking for ideas for new projects such as how to make a new website more attractive for public or how to technically improve it. To that end, today, millennials are considerable members of companies they work for.
Secondly, parents love their children and do everything possible to improve their lives. In this way governments, which comprise of people with families, try to improve education and healthcare to provide better conditions to live not only for them personally, but for their kids. These efforts affect the entire society. For instance, in my country, an education in a college or a university is free for most of the students. The government funds institutions because it wants to give children a chance to have a profession and excel in life. Furthermore, I was one of the pupils who did not pay a penny for acquiring a pharmaceutical degree. This opportunity has been benefiting the community I live in and me personally since as a pharmacist, I can help people to stay healthy and is able to support my own family financially.
To conclude, I strongly believe that juveniles have the tremendous influence on the society. This is because they are valuable workers, and people, who adults count on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: COMPRISE_OF
Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as for, for instance, i think, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88743455497 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92920239884 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575916230366 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8147724594 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2631578947 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0890836592876 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263915730433 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0244351011334 0.0737576698707 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583163971602 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200286715189 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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