Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In civilized and industrialized societies, future of community has always been among primary concerns of human beings' lives. Today, it is axiomatic that young people elapse a longer part of their life for doing useful work in society. A plethora of people possess the conviction that young people have an impact on the significant decisions related to society, whereas others might exactly hold the opposite view. I firmly endorse the former conviction instead of the later one. In what follows, I am going to delve aptly into the most outstanding reasons to advocate my point of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that youths have a larger share of the population of society in most countries. Therefore, their activities and works influence on community. By and large, it is established beyond doubt that young people play a pivotal role in the society. It is no secret that, the more time spends, the more authorities realize that their society is affected by the activities and decisions of youths. In my own experience, my country has more old people and tends to get a lot of young people from other countries. Because, my country decides to use the thought and energy of young people instead of old people to make further improvements.
Another equally noteworthy point supporting this opinion is that nowadays almost all young people educates from different universities in various fields. Hence, they may be an engineer, a medic, a politician, and so on. Accordingly, for example, a youth who becomes a politician or lawyer has a high quota in the significant decisions of society. A recent empirical study conducted by scientists of university of Virginia on prosperous communities revealed that 80 percent of these societies have learned young people who have an important role to play in their societies, so that they can lead to increasing progressive communities. Consequently, Society would not have been successful had it not used the decisions of its youths.
To put it in briefly, all the enumerated reasons lead us to the conclusion that young people have a great impact on the society future, so their role is very important in the community. However, a paramount issue that must be mentioned is that some counterexamples might exist, which are not mentioned above. As a result, I suggest conducting more surveys and studies to answer this question more precisely.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, briefly, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in brief, as a result, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08816120907 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88323218096 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534005037783 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2549731556 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.315789474 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8947368421 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243004327587 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678083344154 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493343872665 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144130865247 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194798165991 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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