Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In civilized and industrialized societies, human beings have always strived to improve their living standards and bring more convenience to their day-to-day lives. Today it is axiomatic that in modern era, young people usually elapse the longer part of their life working. A plethora people possess the conviction that it is better for youth to have ability to plan for their future, whereas others might hold exactly the opposite view. I firmly endorse the first conviction instead of the later one. In what follows, I am going to aptly delve into the most outstanding reasons to advocate my point of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that nowadays most of parents are educated and well knowledgeable about the effect of having plan for children on their opportunities of future. It should be stressed that ever success stems from having plan for future. In fact, nowadays a number of educated people has increased compared to the past for obtain the suitable job. By and large, it is established beyond doubt that the competition has intensified among young people for having their favorable vocation. In essence, youth have to plan and organize that will be major and successful person in their near future. In my own experience, my parent spent much time for me to specialize in specific field, which was civil engineering. Now, I am a successful engineer at my field. Meanwhile, it gives rise to an increase of self-satisfaction and self-esteem.
Another equally noteworthy point supporting this opinion is that in the world we live in, everything has been changed and developed. In essence, the criteria on which assessments are based have altered. Accordingly, we should keep pace with these changes in order to be updated person. For example, youth should learn how to deal with up-to-minute technology and they have to intensity their abilities to use the developed technologies. The noteworthy statistics conducted in Apple company in my country, shows that the most of its employees who have high ability for working in this company. Because they had much effort for learning the use of new technologies and they always plan to update and keep pace with the developed technologies. Consequently, they would not have become prosperous individuals had they not planned for their future's job.
To put it in briefly, all enumerated reasons lead us to the conclusion that it is very important for youth to have plan for their future for being successful persons. However, a paramount issue that must be mentioned is that this cannot be used for everybody and some counterexamples might exist, which are not mentioned above. As a result, I suggest conducting more surveys and studies to answer this question more precisely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the parents') or simply say ''most parents''.
Suggestion: most of the parents; most parents
... point to be mentioned is that nowadays most of parents are educated and well knowledgeable abo...
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Line 13, column 116, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
... it is very important for youth to have plan for their future for being successful p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, briefly, consequently, first, however, if, so, well, whereas, while, for example, in brief, in fact, as a result, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2313.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11725663717 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85091761089 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54203539823 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.310442194 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.565217391 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.652173913 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04347826087 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21952252598 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062151827052 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04792934999 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134206286425 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00335567810782 0.0645574589148 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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