Do you agree or disagree? It is better to relax through watching a film and reading a book than doing physical exercises?
There are some moot points about what way is the best way for relaxation. The question of whether it is better to relax with reading a book or watching television or doing a physical activity has aroused as a subject of controversy among scholars. Everyone has his own zeitgeist. When it comes to my position, I strongly subscribe to the point that it is better to relax with physical activity. I have some reasons the most outstanding of which will be explicated in the ensuing paragraph.
The first reason worth discussing here is that needless to say that exercise has many benefits for humans health. Scientist asserts that sports have many lucrative aspects on individuals, one of the momentous aspects is making relaxation. Owing to an increase in metabolism rate with exercise, people can boost their health rate. As a result, a practice can ameliorate our nervous system and make our body relax. As a case to the point I vividly remember, when I had an exam I studied very hard and due to this work I got a bad headache which was very chronic and did not decline with any narcotics. One of my friends suggested me to do some relaxation exercise after studying consequently, my harsh pain decreases dramatically. My personal experience competently corroborates to the point that sports have a considerable aspect in people and can relax them very well.
By the same token, another paramount reason to be mentioned here is that scholar claims that exercise leads to release some hormone in our brain which gives rise to relaxation and happiness in human. This wonderful hormone is endorphin which has a crucial effect on our body. One of the most important impacts of this hormone is relaxation. My personal experience demonstrates this reality two days ago I watched a program on the BBC channel. In that program scientist set up an experiment to determine the impact of exercise on body function thus, they tested two groups one of that group did not any practice in a week and another group did exercise frequently. Results showed that the group which did activity frequently had more endorphin rate in their brain and the corollary of that was the more endorphin lead the more relaxation and happiness. My personal example shed some light to the point that sorts have a positive perspective in our body function.
To wrap it up, according to the aforementioned reasons, I reiterate that it is better to relax with doing exercise because this action not only fortifies our healthiness but also, help to our body release some beneficial hormones that are very good for our well-being.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
...hat way is the best way for relaxation. The question of whether it is better to relax with reading a bo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, thus, well, as a result, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2154.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87330316742 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7805494295 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506787330317 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1691498992 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.7 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157212851152 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468086943843 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743186892036 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112843440314 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583272830842 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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