Business, whether owned by self or someone else, requires expertise and dedication. Some believe that working in business owned by someone else is better for their own reasons. However, in my opinion, working for a family business is far better for an individual compared to working in business elsewhere. Following reasons back my claim by providing logical context and examples.
Firstly, an individual always has a better understanding of a family business compared to an external business. When someone joins a new company, he/she has to spend considerable amount of time before earning adequate understanding of the trade and decision making power. Moreover, in most cases, people join firms at an intermediate post and hence miss out on learning the nuances of other jobs that lie lower in the hierarchy. On the other hand, for instance, one observes the family business grow from scratch and more often than not spends time lending helping hands in the day-to-day activities. This helps one to work at all levels in a business which is crucial to understanding a business in and out.
Secondly, working in an owned business exposes an individual of risking one's own money and thus makes one more responsible and helps one grow better. In contrast, people working in groups in a company and thus the whole responsibility is disbursed on the whole team rather than an individual. Moreover, since the money invested is someone else's, the commitment to the job is lesser. For instance, a salaried employee working in a reputed firm is at least risk since, he is bound to be paid at the end of the month. However, in a family business, since the livelihood of an individual is at stake, he/she will work with more fever. Thus, the growth of an individual is stimulated more when he/she works in a family owned business.
Lastly, there are other benefits of managing a family business one such as independence. Most firms are rigidly structured and there is a definite boundaries that divide the responsibility of work. However, when one works in family business, one has more independence to make decisions as well work. The paradigm of the work can be altered effectively as per the business needs without any delay. Moreover, working independently helps one become more mature and passionate about his/her work. Thus, running a family business is always better that working in a business run by someone else.
To sum up, the above-mentioned advantages justify my point that for one's growth, both personally and professionally, one should work in family business and avoid working in a business owned by someone else.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'boundary'?
Suggestion: boundary
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, at least, for instance, in contrast, such as, in most cases, in my opinion, on the whole, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2198.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05287356322 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85708933004 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475862068966 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 718.2 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.701789321 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9090909091 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7727272727 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.68181818182 5.45110844103 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445474933081 0.236089414692 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152444098051 0.076458572812 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130254705461 0.0737576698707 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31404008869 0.150856017488 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10207444212 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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