Do you agree or disagree? It is impossible to always be completely honest with your friends.
It is said that honesty is the best policy and one should stay honest . Whatever is the situation and whom you are talking to irrespective of that one should stay honest at all time. This moral that is taught to every student by their parents. But when it comes to friends it is said that it is tough or impossible to stay honest with friends. And I did not agree with that statement because of the following reason which I will eradicate in the following passage.
The first reason that strike my mind is that a person can stay honest only to two person. First is he himself and second is to his friends. Every person have many friends and their is one best friend of him to which he share all of his problem and feelings. And you cannot talk lie with that friend. For example there is a friend of mine named Rahul. He is my childhood friend. we both have grown together in life. we used to play together, eat together and do all fun activities together. we both used to share our feelings and problems to each other. Even if I did not able to tell my parents by i used to tell him. And still today I used to talk with him. It is impossible to lie with him. Even if I try he used to catch that lie easily. If there is good bonding between you and your friend than it is impossible to lie with your friend as he knows you at your best.
In addition to that when you stay honest to your friend it develops a strong bonding between you and your friend. It develops trust on your friend and of your friend on you, when you and your friend are honest to each other. Then after developing of that trust and bonding it is impossible to tell lie to your friend. For example with my friend Rahul I used remain honest at all time and always tell him the truth. Then one day situation came where I have to tell lie to him but i was not able to because we have developed a trust on each other for last 15 years and I was not able to break it. Hence I tell him the truth which was very painful to him.
In conclusion after considering the above reason a friend is always honest to friend irrespective of the situation and circumstances. And they will remain honest to other because due to the developement of trust and bonding between them over a long period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...at a person can stay honest only to two person. First is he himself and second is to h...
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... second is to his friends. Every person have many friends and their is one best frie...
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...nds. Every person have many friends and their is one best friend of him to which he s...
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...r is one best friend of him to which he share all of his problem and feelings. And yo...
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...ur feelings and problems to each other. Even if I did not able to tell my parents by i ...
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... him. It is impossible to lie with him. Even if I try he used to catch that lie easily....
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...5 years and I was not able to break it. Hence I tell him the truth which was very pai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, second, so, still, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 43.0788530466 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21889400922 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22769177596 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.380184331797 0.524837075471 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5134909432 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8148148148 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0740740741 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238620767282 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730248415166 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773520173818 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153758864892 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412939026932 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 11.7677419355 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.89 8.01818996416 73% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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