do you agree or disagree that people behavior now have a negative effect on future generation comfortable life?
What behavior contemporary citizens of the world have may heavily influence the life situation of the next generations. Therefore, we need to think about this problem comprehensively to ensure well-being of our children, their offspring, and so on. I believe that current people’s demeanor toward matters will have generally positive impact on people who will exist in the future. Today’s individuals have three main satisfactory behavior: willingness to conserve the environment, opposition against the discrimination, and supporting the demography. I feel that these attitudes are beneficial for others, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, the majority of people are wishing to improve the nature, so next generations will not confront health issues caused by pollutant substances. Mankind spoiled the mother nature so severely that they are suffering from the negative consequences themselves. However, because the authorities and scholars grasped the result of such matters, they are paying in-depth attention to preserve the nature. They are carrying out various types of work to maintain and better the ambient stuff. Therefore, I believe that the nature will become better thanks to their commitment within few years. Consequently, the following generations will go through the life under the fine situation of the nature.
Secondly, people are conscientiously fighting against the discriminations, which means their sons and daughter will not be discriminated. There are several kinds of discrimination within various cultures and nations, so some youngsters are having hard time because they do not receive fine communication from others. Nonetheless, I believe that individuals opposing against this inhumane activity can eliminate this issue completely. As a result, youngsters will live in the society in which everybody treats with each other fairly and with respect.
Finally, the majority of adults are voting for demography so that all countries will have the just political system, which signifies that no one will not be punished relentlessly for being free in the future. The magnitude of people is living in the nation where totalitarian communist parties are dominating the whole country such as North Korea. Folks of these nations are suffering from not having freedom, compared to people from other regions. Nevertheless, many institutions and governments including the United Nations are persuading communist nations to start the equal political system in which voters have freedom. I hope that this type of behavior will probably work so well that all countries will have fair governments. In conclusion, children who will born in nations that are under control of the communism for now will have a fine life.
In summation, I think that current people’s behavior is likely to affect the life of following generation positively. This is because they will live in the fresh environment, will not go through any discrimination, and can be free thanks to demographic society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 668, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ese ideas in the subsequent paragraphs. To begin with, the majority of people ar...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... To begin with, the majority of people are wishing to improve the nature, so next generati...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 704, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...under the fine situation of the nature. Secondly, people are conscientiously fig...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ith each other fairly and with respect. Finally, the majority of adults are voti...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 767, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'bear' or 'be born'?
Suggestion: bear; be born
...ments. In conclusion, children who will born in nations that are under control of th...
^^^^
Line 7, column 854, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ommunism for now will have a fine life. In summation, I think that current peopl...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2590.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5460385439 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04311812674 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533190578158 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 801.9 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.11290842 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.608695652 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3043478261 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5652173913 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157595142839 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498344866576 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502161647837 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940931002976 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281997933787 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 10.9000537634 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 86.8835125448 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.