do you agree or disagree with this sentence?to remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success.
The question is whether to remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success or not. In my vantage point, a positive energy acts as a power drug and it can motivate us in the best way toward success. My arguments and reasons are listed the below that will strengthen my point of view:
First of all, failing can play an important role in obtaining prosperity. Most of the famous people in the world have experienced several fails in their life; however at the end they could have been succeeded. What is the awesome secret about them? Admittedly, having a positive force and happy soul has encouraged them to continue their way. For instance, the professor SAMIEE – he is one of the most famous brain surgeons in the world- always highlights that has had a difficult life, however the thing which helped him to improve himself was a good sprit and confident to the future.
Second, if arriving to the success is convenient, people will not perceive the meanings of fails. Everyone can let down quickly after every mistake, and this matter will decrease their performance. As the old saying goes” the mistakes are the precious lessons of life that can be learned in the hardest way”. One of the most vital lessons that should be learned in this way is happiness. I remember, last year when I failed in archaeology exam, I could not eat any things and was crying continually, my grandma told me that you were a looser not because of you failed in exam, but because of your soul were killed by yourself. It was a huge flick to my life.
Third, the studies have shown that having a happy soul can raise up the brain’s performance. When a person can joy every thing, his brain will be able to concentrate on his goals, consequently accessing to prosperity will be possible. Optimistic people receive the best rewards of the world, because the world is belonged to prosperous people who are deserved for it.
As I have illustrated, I strongly agree with this sentence, happiness can guide us toward success. No matter how many years it lasts, the most important thing is the happy and being joyful.
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Essay evaluation report
was a good sprit and confident to the future.
was a good spirit and confidence to the future.
a looser
a loser
Sentence: ... himself was a good sprit and confident to the future.
Error: sprit Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
It is not just 'to remain happy..' but 'to remain happy and optimistic both'
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Always add a blank line between paragraphs to make it easier to read.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 374 350
No. of Characters: 1704 1500
No. of Different Words: 206 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.398 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.556 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.428 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 112 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.684 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.548 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.368 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.285 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.509 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.104 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'for instance', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.209905660377 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.169811320755 0.158761421928 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0825471698113 0.0866891130778 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0377358490566 0.046263068375 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0778301886792 0.0685040099705 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0966981132075 0.118717715034 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0495283018868 0.0351676179071 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5758592094 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0212264150943 0.0309702414327 69% => OK
Particles: 0.00471698113208 0.00188951952338 250% => OK
Determiners: 0.103773584906 0.0887237588012 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0353773584906 0.0209618222197 169% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0259433962264 0.0139019557991 187% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2145.0 2387.08602151 90% => OK
No of words: 375.0 408.028673835 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325333333333 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.229333333333 0.251872472559 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.154666666667 0.174417080927 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104 0.112833075102 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5758592094 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568 0.524397521467 108% => OK
Word variations: 65.0230265821 59.2087087015 110% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8333333333 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5967165477 48.84282405 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.166666667 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 43.7666666667 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.2479338843 1.45489161554 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205513444803 0.300154397459 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0844338000915 0.103427244359 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0837018685172 0.0752933317313 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.480758036141 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152071314259 0.151897553556 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895138519554 0.114077575197 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131766107652 0.0781384742642 169% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.303417530219 0.336927656856 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.085426267604 0.067059652881 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152645663261 0.210909579961 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929274020187 0.0618886996521 150% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.