Do you agree or disagree technology has made children life less creative than in the past.
Nowadays most of the children like to create diferent kind of things. They can improve their knowledge through difenrent kind of sources. I disagree with the statment which says technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. I feel this way for two main reasons which I explore in the following essay.
Most of the childern use these days technology for creative newthings. Technology is improve the children knowledge by given information. My own experience is a compelling example of this. My sister's son need to make aircondition. Firs he used internet and find out the information. Then he found the equipments for made it. The he search what kind of fans made by before.Afterthat those information he think how to creat it. Then he made it after few days. This is good example to technology help to improver children knoledge by reading, listeing and seen.
Secondly, children get motivation to create new iterms by using technology. Because most of the children like to learn new technology. So its help to them create new innavations. For instance, if child made car structure. Then he like to modifiy it using new technology. Also, while students do the research, they can use new technology to creat new innovation. Actually, New innovetion creat by using new technology.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that technology need to create new iterms. This is because improve childern's knoledge and motivate them by using new technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
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Suggestion: improved
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'The' or 'he'?
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...en he found the equipments for made it. The he search what kind of fans made by befor...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'searches'.
Suggestion: searches
...ound the equipments for made it. The he search what kind of fans made by before.After...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for made it. The he search what kind of fans made by before.Afterthat those info...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Afterthat
...earch what kind of fans made by before.Afterthat those information he think how to creat...
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... create new iterms by using technology. Because most of the children like to learn new ...
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Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...h, they can use new technology to creat new innovation. Actually, New innovetion creat by usin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 243.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10699588477 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91423117046 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534979423868 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4569047239 48.9658058833 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.4090909091 100.406767564 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.0454545455 20.6045352989 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190088847722 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596968983494 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942213566582 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118728182389 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792787045177 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 58.1214874552 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.17 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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