Do you agree or disagree? The way people dress is a good indication of his or her personality or character.
style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%;mso-bidi-language: FA">In the modern world people have more freedom and options for their style than years ago. I strongly agree with this idea that the way of people dressing is not only shows their character but also shows their social position. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%;mso-bidi-language: FA">first of all, clothes always reveals more than themselves. they can present a whole signs of any bodies’ personality and beliefs. For example, there is a huge difference between different ages attire. usually people in thirties and forties wear more conservative clothes; they try to show themselves more reasonable and confident with a stable personality, by wearing simpler clothes with paler colors. In contrast, teenagers and people in first years of twenties usually wear more strange design clothes with sharp colors, and some time it shows their repellent personality, because they are trying to find their personality, and show themselves as an especial person different from others. so every day they may try new style. Moreover, we also can understand people’s interests by their clothes too, for example, we can figure out that, if they are fans of an especial band, or they are art student or engineer, etc.
style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%;mso-bidi-language: FA">Second, the way of clothing shows not only people’s personality but also their social position and their career. For example, there is a huge difference of clothing between hierarchy employees of a company. usually the boss of a company wear formal suit, so everyone in the company, at the first glance, understands that he/she is an important person in the company. In contrast, if the company has some workers, they may have to wear a uniform that shows lower class of the boss. Even, in different careers we can see very diverse range of clothing. For instance, a director of a movie, although he/she is a very important person, he/she usually wears more casual dresses, such as t-shirt and jeans, to be more comfortable to move and work. As a result, when we see a person we may be able to guess his career or social position a bit.
style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%;mso-bidi-language: FA">To sum up, I strongly believe that, the way of clothing is a very strong sign of any bodies’ personality. because it usually shows people’s interest and sometimes it is age requirement, and because it can be represent their career and their social position too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in contrast, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2259.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61940298507 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.49306196771 2.67179642975 243% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495024875622 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1115414518 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.894736842 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1578947368 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0886130621742 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323418307507 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341681656556 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666268277479 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287872587047 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 10.9000537634 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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