Without any shadow of doubt, Education plays a significant rule as far as development of society concerns. Diffrent aspects of children's life such as job opprtunety, economic welbeing and social statues, to name but a few are directly influenced by their study. Some people belive, educating children is a hard tas today in comparison with past, because children nowadays spend most of their time on cell phone, internet and so on. On the other hand, some peole believe otherwise. I, dor one, subscribe to the latter idea and believe the educating the children is more easier than before. I take this view for some conspiculous reasosn which elaborate hearunder.
It is crystal clear that, in our modern life, parent as the main gurdians of children, become more aware about the importance of education. Nowdays by development of societies, parent have more free time to devote to their children study. Paents by knowing their rule and also, for providing better future life for their dear children, spend more time on children education. One aspect of their rules relates to the control of children cellphone and their activites on social, to name but few. Parent also lead the children to use these rechnologies in right way in which help them with their education.
Without any hesitation, by developing technology, take for instance the internet, children have many facilities which can help them in their education. We have many applications on cellphone which can help the chidren to enhance their knowledge and also there are many social medias like Linkdin which are established in order to improve the sudents and childrens studies and endows them with state of the art methods to improve their education. So, the cellphones, social medias are not necessarily as a barrier in educating children, they are useful if we know how to use them.
Last but not least, In our developed world, children are more cognizant of the fact that education is the cornerstone of their life and without proper education they deprive themself from welfare and well being in future. With this in mind, they can organize their life in a way that, playng game does not hurm their education. The number of articles, invention and so forth and comparing this statistics with past, reveal the the fact that children education has been improved considerably.
In a nutshell, by improving the parents knowledge about their rule in children education, development of technology , especially in edutainment app, and also childrens awarness about the importance of education. I believe, the educating of children is easier than past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 565, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...d believe the educating the children is more easier than before. I take this view for some ...
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Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
... childrens studies and endows them with state of the art methods to improve their education. So,...
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Line 4, column 212, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ve themself from welfare and well being in future. With this in mind, they can organize t...
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Line 4, column 389, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...s, invention and so forth and comparing this statistics with past, reveal the the fa...
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Line 4, column 423, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...aring this statistics with past, reveal the the fact that children education has been i...
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Line 4, column 423, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...aring this statistics with past, reveal the the fact that children education has been i...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...rably. In a nutshell, by improving the parents knowledge about their rule in children ...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ren education, development of technology , especially in edutainment app, and also...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as to, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2190.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11682242991 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70635293439 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502336448598 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5993901938 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.263157895 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5263157895 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225950289685 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871128098936 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784711548636 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143874455942 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522931606214 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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