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Education has an influential and tremendous impact on our lives. In fact, it is vitally important to educate the young generation and provide them with a high level of knowledge because they can guide our nation toward progress. Therefore, I totally agree with the statement that said that the government should make it possible for all children to go for preschool due to its benefits in both of improving the educational level and reduce the financial burden on parents.
To begin with, it is vital to start educating children from an early age to instill the concrete basis of learning. Indeed, they are more receptive to knowledge than older kids because they are like sponge able to absorb the information easily and effectively, thus, it is essential for their overall well-being to start learning as early as possible. For instance, young kids have the ability to learn the basic and fundamental data and skills, which can highly enhance their future personalities and refine their interdisciplinary development. Moreover, exposure to a structured learning environment can reinforce the information obtained in other realms, such as a house or out in nature by acting as a form of retention. In conclusion, governmental authorities should aid parents in providing their children free educational facilities such as nurseries and day-cares due to a significance of an early education in building a concrete knowledge base.
Second, the government has the obligation to provide early education to all children regardless their parents' income. In fact, this responsibility is crucial and most authorities have started to understand the significance of initiating the education by age three and have devoted more attention and have allocated more money to support preschool, so the parents can start this process as early as possible. For example, parents are reluctant to provide this opportunity to their children because of the expensive cost and an exorbitant fee, they can't bear with this expense. Therefore, this will deprive kids of a very vital experience which will affect their prosperity in general, since their counterpart will take the advantage over them, and this is frequently the case of underprivileged families. Thus, the government should assist the families from all walks of life in educating their toddler and endow them with total financial support due to the imperative and critical benefits of education on their welfare.
To sum up, it is critical to initiate the process of education from early childhood due to its benefits on creating a profound knowledge base and not to discriminate base on wealth. Hopefully, the government will aid parents in this endeavor as soon as possible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ensive cost and an exorbitant fee, they cant bear with this expense. Therefore, this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in general, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2290.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27649769585 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99274253642 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488479262673 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 731.7 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.6778728557 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.666666667 100.406767564 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9333333333 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 5.45110844103 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212049877124 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089133203395 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789068572855 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143226206662 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202333035762 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 11.7677419355 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 58.1214874552 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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