Essay topics: TPO-19 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In our fast-changing modern life state of affairs change untiringly and to keep up with this pace of changing we need information from dynamic sources. We get various news from different sources. I personally agree with the agreement that we need diverse resources of news to be well known.
In our diurnal life there are many sources of news, First, the newspaper or television. In India, television news channel and newspapers are divided into two categories generally. One is regional and other is Overall country news or international news. In order to be well-known everyone needs to see those news channels. If I eager about my regional news then I see the local news channels and in order, to the country news I turned to the international or national news channel. Moreover, Newspapers also operates in the same manner. They are the same kind of stages for news but they provide a different kind of sources to our appeasement of news.
From the newspaper or channels, we knew about our mundane news, but other news lives our quotidian trends or gossip we buy different fashion magazines or film magazines. In order to know about scientific invention and wildlife news, we bought different magazines, like National Geographic magazine actually a great source to know about recent wildlife and our environmental changes happened. To know about recent gadgets or technological updates we buy tech magazines or in recent YouTube is a famous stage for crazy tech peoples.
Internet and websites are really a famous source of information and they cover that news, what news channels and papers do not cover. For example, a recent tech launch, usually news channels just skimming over the news out particular official website or blog provide intensive information about the product. At last, when we came down to knowledge about information how can we forget about our traditional books or even story books. From the many past centuries, various books keep our hunger for knowledge through history books or human evolution or biology, whatever the subject was. Journals and scientific articles are also an important provider of information. Journal provides more deep information than books, books are providing only particular general ideas but the journal is a more intensive source of information. We know all those above mention information to be a diverse well-known person. Without one of the source, we cannot be enough informed.
Now, some people argue that in our modern life we get confused about which source is reliable because there are so many news providers and it is hard to consume that many knowledge at the same time. I suggest people use their human mind and consciousness to differentiate between good and bad news. Decide yourself which sources are sound more convincing to you.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 167, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...roviders and it is hard to consume that many knowledge at the same time. I suggest p...
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Line 8, column 167, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much knowledge', 'a good deal of knowledge'.
Suggestion: much knowledge; a good deal of knowledge
...roviders and it is hard to consume that many knowledge at the same time. I suggest people use ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s are sound more convincing to you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, then, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2359.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11713665944 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74663222767 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507592190889 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 741.6 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1541938868 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2916666667 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2083333333 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171083999757 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613153308642 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468674419456 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107353691748 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398618357067 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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