Essay topics: TPO-23 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specifi | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Essay topics: TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, holding a job position is an important part of our lives. Everybody is trying to show their best to occupy a better job which is more satisfactory to them. Some people believe that it is important to work quickly and risk making mistakes. However, others hold the opposite point of view. As far as I am concerned, I think that it is better to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint. One significant reason which worth mentioning is that we should do our job correctly, so others can trust us as a reliable person. If you do your job without any mistakes, others will be encouraged to make an account on you because you are a trustworthy person who always does his job correctly. My father, for example, always do their job slowly, and without any mistakes. He is a very successful person in his vocation, and he has a lot of customers. I remember that one of his customers said that your father is a reliable person and everyone wants to work with him because he is very strict and precise when he is working. As you can see, finishing our job correctly helps to increase our popularity in the long run. Another significant reason that worth shed light on is that when we do our job slowly and correctly, this gives us a sense of confidence. When you know that you have done your job correctly because you checked that many times, it gives you the opportunity to deliver your final result with confidence. Last year, for instance, I was working on my university project and I had done it before the deadline. I was happy that I have submitted my project before the deadline, but I was not sure that it was correct or not. I just wanted to do it quickly. After days, my professor called me and said that your project should be revised because it contains many grammatical errors. After that, I figured out that it would be better to do my task slower but correctly. To sum up, whether we do our tasks slowly or quickly, we finally finish them, but the point is that we should do it correctly. Doing jobs slowly not only would give us a sense of confidence but also it helps us to finish correctly. That is why we should do our tasks slowly.<div> </div>

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, for example, for instance, i think, you know, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 88.0 43.0788530466 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3119.0 1977.66487455 158% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 6.43092783505 4.8611393121 132% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.58076853736 2.67179642975 321% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441237113402 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 855.0 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.328719489 48.9658058833 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.157894737 100.406767564 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5263157895 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84210526316 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138703630243 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641634814173 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726433943694 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138703630243 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 11.7677419355 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 58.1214874552 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.31 10.9000537634 186% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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