Everybody makes New Year’s resolution in the arrival new year. What would you make as goal for this new year?
1.To help with the community
2.To do more exercise and have more nutritious foods
3.To have better time management
New year resolutions are always an important thing in people's life. We can set up a goal and try to achieve it. Some people may prefer to set their goal as helping with the community or having better time management, while others want to do more exercise and eat healthier. In my opinion, I prefer the latter choice.
To begin with, I can have a better result on my studies if I exercise more and eat healthier. To be more specific, people need to spend lots of energy on working or studying, so by doing exercise can help people release their stress and eating healthier can give people more energy to work. For example, my dad always like to go out to play tennis whenever he is tired after long times of works. When my dad go outdoor, he say that he can breathe some fresh air while exercising. Moreover, he can also interact with his friends and talk about some fun facts happen in their life recently. Then, he will go home and my mom always prepare healthy meals with lots of vegetables and fruits. After doing these things, he tell me that he can focus better on his work. For me, this is a very good solution because I often feel extremely tired after long times of studies. As a result, I think eating healthier and doing more exercise is the new year resolution I will want to achieve.
In addition, eating healthier and doing more exercise can also save us lots of money. By doing this, we can have a healthier body so we will not be sick all the time. Therefore, we do not spend lots of money to go to the doctor. Besides, eating at home is always healthier and cheaper than eating at a restaurant, so if we want to eat healthier, we will have to eat at home. As a result, it can save us lots of money. Moreover, when people go out to exercise, since it is free, we will not need to spend any money. Also, if we use our time on exercising, we will not have time to go to the mall to buy clothes or movie theater to watch movies. Thus, when we eat healthier and do more exercise, we can save lots of money according to the reason upon. Therefore, I will definitely set my new year resolution as eating healthier and doing more exercise.
Undoubtedly, some people may say that it is more important to help with the community or to have better time management, because those two are essential in our life. However, if people do not have a health body, how can they have energy to manage their time or help their community? As a result, I think doing more exercise and eat healthier is the most important new year resolution I will wish to have.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 717, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tells'.
Suggestion: tells
...nd fruits. After doing these things, he tell me that he can focus better on his work...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, i think, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 9.8082437276 245% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 481.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32848232848 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37611293179 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.407484407484 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.51792114695 341% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4939781832 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.28 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.24 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.12 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228082021777 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861263946498 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846737953049 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194640255382 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675676937824 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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