Everyone wants to be as healthy as possible. Fortunately, in modern society there are many things that people can do to improve their physical condition. What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?
These days, people want to be more productive and happier, and health is a determinant factor that help us to achieve all of our goals. I personally think that eating healthy food everyday is the best way to stay healthy. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
Sometimes people think that it takes a lot of money to be healthy. They thought they have to be a member in gym to get healthier. Many believed that healthy food costs more than junk food. However, I think find the healthy food is actually more simple and more cheaper. It does not have to be salad in fancy restaurant, but vegetables and fruits are found in market with cheaper price. My grandmother is a compelling example of this. She was very conscious with her meal and always choose steamed food or vegetables over fried food or processed food. As a result, she is still healthy in her 80s. Healthy food does not have to be expensive and complicated. But starting to make a habit by eating one fruit everyday and choose green vegetables over fries are a good step to start.
Another reason is eating healthy food does not take much time and effort. Unlike going to the gym which we have to prepare more time for packing our clothes and travel time to the gym, eat healthy does not take specific preparation time. We can just start by choosing a healthier option in the menu or just as simple as not going to fast food restaurants. For instance, my sister feels healthier after a month of eating healthy. She neither go to fast food restaurants nor go to the gym. However, she keep in mind to always choose fruits for snacks.
In conclusion, I think the best way to stay healthy is to be more conscious in deciding what to eat everyday as what we consume give more effect to our health. More importantly, eat healthy does not take much money and time. It is as simple as choosing healthier option to consume.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...ealthy food is actually more simple and more cheaper. It does not have to be salad in fancy ...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ing to make a habit by eating one fruit everyday and choose green vegetables over fries ...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to green'
Suggestion: to green
...by eating one fruit everyday and choose green vegetables over fries are a good step t...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'keeps'.
Suggestion: keeps
...aurants nor go to the gym. However, she keep in mind to always choose fruits for sna...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ind to always choose fruits for snacks. In conclusion, I think the best way to s...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... more conscious in deciding what to eat everyday as what we consume give more effect to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, still, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42542485233 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477142857143 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7998111993 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9090909091 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166591997548 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579172768168 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062856370023 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128743508571 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560037145177 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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