Everyone wants to be as healthy as possible. Fortunately, in modern society there are many things that people can do to improve their physical condition. What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?
• Get exercise on a regular basis
• Eat healthy food every day
• Visit a doctor for regular examinations
Over the years, many people living in urban areas believe that a comfortable and healthy life is paramount for life continuity. I think it is best to improve our health by eating nutritious and balanced meals all the times. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, eating fruits and vegetable will upgrade our health. Fruits and vegetables are one of the most essential vitamins needed for our body to act well and be free from any ailment. Vegetarians are well-known for not visiting hospitals regularly because of their diets. Our health can be improved when feeding on fruits and vegetables that will fight all diseases in our body system and make us looking good all the time whereby our life span will be prolonged too. For instance, my friend always falls sick and doctor advises him to feed on fruits and vegetable for one month. After the scheduled time, he consulted the doctor and he was told to be healed from the disease which led my friend into regularly eating of fruits and vegetables. Therefore, adding fruits and vegetables to our diet is of high benefits to our health and make us free from ailments.
Secondly, avoiding junk foods improves health. People of urban city have no time for preparing meal thereby resulting into buying of junk foods every day by day. To upgrade our physical fitness, we should try to remove high calorie foods like snacks, ice cream, canned foods etc from our diets, which add no values to our body. It increases the fat content in our body leading to negative side effects and even death. For example, my brother that lives in Germany, likes eating doughnut with soft drinks every morning because of no time to prepare breakfast which has resulted into diabetes for him now.
In conclusion, I strongly believe its desirable for people in urban area should avoid junk foods and fortify their diet with fruits and vegetables for them have a healthy life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... because of no time to prepare breakfast which has resulted into diabetes for him...
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...egetables for them have a healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80177514793 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36934226753 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556213017751 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4669414613 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4375 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126868023586 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477843964096 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353875551464 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959737050488 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331113521949 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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