Some people like to spend their money as soon as they earn it, while others think it is better to save their money for some time in the future. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Do not use memorized examples.
In the recent times, people have disparate means of using their hard-earned money to make life more suitable and comfortable for them. I prefer keeping money for future reference to spending all immediately. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following paragraph.
Firstly, saving money will help you in time of needs. The money earn as a profit for some employee is not enough to sustain them, to avoid being embarrassed, it is advisable to form a habit of saving a penny which will surely be useful in time of needs. For example, my friend is fond of saving any amount from his salary no matter how small the money is. Unfortunately, two consecutive months ago, there is a crisis in his company thereby resulting into immense loss for his company. Thus, he was unable to receive salary for those two months. Nevertheless, he falls back on his savings for feeding and transport until in the recent time, when the matter is solved.
Secondly, it will aid in time of unexpected situation. Some unplanned events occur in our daily activity, saving money will be the only solution to proffer at the moment. Moreover, many a times nobody is willing to give assistance to lend money but if one has actually prepared himself by saving from his salary, this will be of tremendous advantage. For instance, my cousin was laid off from his company last week. It was a shock to him because he wasn’t expecting it, however, he has saved up to two million naira in his account, which he used to start-up a boutique business.
In conclusion, I prefer to keep saving from the hard-earned money because it will give assistance in time of needs and in case of emergency to finish the earned money at the moment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
...proffer at the moment. Moreover, many a times nobody is willing to give assistance to...
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Line 4, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s and in case of emergency to finish the earned money at the moment.
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Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...finish the earned money at the moment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66229508197 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57771234115 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577049180328 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4102835724 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 5.45110844103 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254891834246 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933561355784 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618834020173 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176283674651 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049838780106 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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