Some people like to spend their money as soon as they earn it while others think it is better to save their money for some time in the future Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion Do not use memorized examples
In this modern world, money is everything as the technology increases all basic needs are getting expensive. It is important to save some money for the future because anything happen bad or unexpectidly than after God only money can help you. In my view, saving and sending both are equally important but I prefer to save more rather than spending. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, now a days homes are so expensive and we need a lot of saved money to buy one because it is a necessary for all families. For instance, me and my husband always wanted to buy a home but unfortunately we do not had enough money because we both do average job. In addition, my husband saves for house and I spend my salary to meet our needs and on some travelling, as we are growing old that's why we take our life balanced. Now, we have enough money and soon we will buy condo home.Thus, this instance elucidates that, with savings enjoyment is also important.
Second, keeping dollar bills for future is really significant because life is so unpredictible. For example, few months back my cousion met an accident and she suffered from a severe leg injury in emergency people took her to the hospital. Moreover, doctors told her parents that she needs a surgery which cost her hundred and fifity million, luckily her dad accustomed to save money. Finally, her operation was successful because she had money at that time. Therefore this example illustrates that, after God money is everything in this materialistic world.
To wrap up, in my opinion as survival in this world become more arduous so people should know to spend and save money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68646864686 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59049629745 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600660066007 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8076839239 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 5.45110844103 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221863422398 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780874627545 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401331158111 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135348501394 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250804679268 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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