The expression “never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The key to success is hard work indeed. My all life I had a five years plan, which means, I have a goal for the next five years and I know exactly where I want to be.
Five years ago I decided that I wanted to live in Europe. I come from Brazil, and at the moment we have a political and economic crisis there. As I am still young I knew I had to do something about it to change my life. So I started thinking about how I could get here, and what options did I have. As a Brazilian, either I get the European visa through work or having the EU citizenship. Finding work as a foreigner is a really hard task, since the European Union has it rules to protect the EU citizens when it comes to work, that means, the company needs to prove that there is no candidate better than me in the all EU to hire me. So I decided to go to the citizenship option. I knew I had some really far Italian relative, and I decided to dig out all the documents and go for it.
At first, people thought I was crazy because it was too much work and too much money as well. To get the citizenship people to need to expend between 6-10 thousand euros nowadays, and that is a lot of money. But it was my dream so I decided to go for it.
After two years of hard work searching for documents, calling Italy every day to locate my dead relative, making searches at cemeteries to build the genealogy tree, contacting far relatives and document administrator’s offices in Brazil, I finally got the all documentation together and I could apply for the citizenship. And now I am exactly where I expected to be five years ago, here in Europe.
That is why I can assure that this sentence is completely true, “never give up”, eventually all your hard work is going to pay you back like happened to me.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, really, so, still, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2361516035 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58354772883 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533527696793 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.7076594132 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8125 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100655496946 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296671771692 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495032880217 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705780472184 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702277230436 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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