The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
One famous entrepreneur once said, that there is no greater failure than to stop trying. This is one of my the most favourite quotes and I completely agree with author's consideration of that issue. It is always better to try(even if the idea seems stupid or hopeless), than regret the lack of action. The path of reaching goals can be rough and may require a lot of sacrifices. But we should stay strong and keep going, because the final results is definitely worth it.
The statement "never, never give up" sounds pretty simple and might be predictably followed by a vast amount of people. Regrettably, the real life is more complicated. To my mind, one of the main reasons of all failures is public opinion. That is why it is essential to strongly support your ideas and truly believe in their success, to reject unsolicited advices from people. We are the ones who create our future, and it's up to us to control our life. I feel extremely confident, that well-known Elon Musk was being called crazy for his ideas. But he didn't care about others opinion, he believed in himself and have achieved significant results.
Our attitude is also important. I would rather say it is crucial. There is no success without failures. The problem is that a path of failures could be pretty challenging. Confidence is our main weapon while dealing with difficulties. The primary task is to preserve it and use effectively towards various obstacles. For instance, let's take a look at our childhood. We couldn't speak or walk at first, but we kept trying and eventually, we've succeeded. It also should be remembered, that if we've managed to stand straight in the face of social pressure, we've already achieved a lot, and will certainly succeed in further actions.
To sum up, the path of never giving up is a hard one to follow. Nevertheless, I'm convinced that everyone can handle it. It requires blood, sweat and tears, but rewards very generously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, i feel, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87575757576 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72501758615 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660606060606 0.524837075471 126% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.769413141 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0416666667 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95833333333 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163324854336 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336543409442 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531394740288 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913240560338 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420737607631 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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