get the news by the newspaper or online
news has an influential and tremendous impact on our lives. In fact, it is vitally important to follow them and stay updated with them in order for the best results to follow suits as it will enrich our mind with a myriad amount of information which will, in turn, broaden our horizon. However, there are many resources we rely on to know about the new news but the leap of an information technology that happens within the contemporary era lead many people to depend on the internet rather than newspapers to read the news they need to be familiar with. Therefore, I believe that the dwellers from around the world will switch to use the online source rather than the traditional type due to its benefits in both improving the educational level and time-saving. The explanations go as follow.
To begin with, it is vital that people seek to enhance the perspective and their information because this will assist them to thrive easily in the community and reflect positively on their intellectual ability. Indeed, being involved with news of the whole world will provide them the opportunity to do so and the new technological innovations such as the computers and large web net will facilitate that. For instance, parents nowadays spend most of their time at work in order to provide their children with life amenities (water, food, shelter). So, they try to work overtime to fulfill their principal needs. Thus, they do not have time to buy a newspaper and know what happened around, but, the net can endow them with everything they want to know about anytime they want because its policy is to keep all the information available for whole life. In contrast, those who depend on the newspaper they will be vulnerable to miss much news because this source will change every day without any repetition. Consequently, most the inhabitants are used to carve out the news they want by using the new informational technology.
Second, the internet is deemed one of the crucial and successful technological advancement because of the many merits that aid the people with such as searching for any concern regarding the news they read. In fact, it will help them by avoiding the squander of their time by asking or buying books to reach their answers. For example, I use to read the news of the other side but sure I found difficulties in understanding all of them. Hence, then I can just search at the same time I read by just clicking and paging through the internet that illustrates the information in an easy and affordable way which will, in turn, reflect positively on my experience that has a great influence on my future workflow because most of the job's requirement ask for a highly educated person. Therefore, this will provide me with a respected and reputation position. In conclusion, in order to grasp and understand the news about all the countries, it is critical to use the online resources.
To sum up, I can not oversee that there are many disadvantages of using the internet but the advantages overweigh the cons. Hopefully, people surge themselves to be up to date with new news by employing the new.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: News
news has an influential and tremendous impac...
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Line 1, column 784, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...el and time-saving. The explanations go as follow. To begin with, it is vital that pe...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... In fact, it will help them by avoiding the squander of their time by asking or buying books...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... to reach their answers. For example, I use to read the news of the other side but ...
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Line 5, column 730, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'jobs'' or 'job's'?
Suggestion: jobs'; job's
... my future workflow because most of the jobs requirement ask for a highly educated p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, however, if, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 52.1666666667 169% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2585.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 538.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80483271375 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72792108777 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498141263941 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 811.8 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.8064746663 48.9658058833 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.25 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143666042819 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491149961608 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541624514876 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928522848553 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308159567665 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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