Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The decisions have an influential and tremendous impact on our lives. In fact, It is vitally important to be considerate and diligent while making a decision because this may help us to achieve the success, moreover, it is crucial to ask people who are older than us like our parents before giving our opinion because they are biased guide and will provide us with the best word of advice especially when we are in dilemma. Therefore, I personally believe that it is imperative to share our thoughts with other before seeking to do anything due to its benefits to improve our perspective and enhance the social skills. The explanations go as follow.
First, people must eagerly seek to carve out the knowledge from individuals surrounding them because this will aid them to gain a myriad amount of a new information which will help them to achieve their goals. Indeed, by sharing their opinions with each other, they will act as check and balance system to avoid any mistake they may face in the future. For instance, I used to ask my parents about every decisions in my life because their advice is the outcome of their experience and their knowledge, in addition, their perspective continue to provide us with the essential guidelines to attain our career aspiration because their input expand our outlook and clarify the options that we can select from, thus, they endowed me the beneficial information that I really needed to be familiar with to reach the perfect decision. In contrast, those who take their decisions by themselves, they will suffer a lot because they will have a limited amount of information because, without a guide, they will learn only a basic. Consequently, making a decision with the help of others is the ideal way to fulfill our goals.
Second, people must instill the concrete basis of the social skills because they are the guiding light that assists them to guide our nation toward progress. In fact, by expressing themselves and thoughts with others, this will improve their interpersonal skills and help them to thrive easily in the community. For example, one day, I asked the students who are older than me in a college about the which course would be better for me to take in order to complete graduation's requirements, thus, they helped me with this decision and gave me the best solution that helped me to reach the success easily, moreover, that gave an opportunity to learn how to deal effectively, cooperate efficiently, and collaborate effectively, thus, such a collaborative environment enhanced my communication skills immensely which had a positive impact om my future workflow and productivity. On the other hand, those who make a decision by themselves, they will face a lot of obstacles because they lack such a large net of collaboration. In conclusion, making a decision by asking for people help has a great role in building up the solid base of the social skills.
To sum up, I cannot oversee that sometimes people need a privacy in making their decisions, but, sharing with people have a favorable effect on both the educational level and the social skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
... the social skills. The explanations go as follow. First, people must eagerly seek to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2595.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 527.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92409867173 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75325202582 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485768500949 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 826.2 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.96227981 48.9658058833 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.0 100.406767564 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1333333333 20.6045352989 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8 5.45110844103 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112162528205 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499404715078 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337615982632 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079700022352 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443006836622 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 11.7677419355 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.1575268817 166% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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