The government can take a variety of actions to help protect the environment. Which one of
the following do you think is the most important for the nation's government to take to protect
the environment.
1)Fund the research to develop environmentally friendly energy sources such as solar and wind
energy.
2)Preserve the natural places like forests and protect the animals that live there
3)Enforce laws to prevent the pollution of air and water by large companies.
1, In modern society, the environmental pollution has emerged as one of the most urgent issue, it is no surprise the government want to find an effectiveness method for protection. There are lots of benefits in the second and third options, but from my point, the fund research can help even more than the others. I feel the first option is the best due to couple of reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
2, First, the government's investment in developing new clean energy is good for stimulating the economy. In order to invent new clean energy, many experts, researchers and engineers will be recruited during the research phase. Many companies will also have the opportunity to provide equipment and materials to support research. In addition, once new energy is widely used in practice, it will create a new industry, generate many new companies, increase the country's GDP, and make more citizens employed. Therefore, the government can obtain more tax revenues and lower the unemployment rate, which is undoubtedly conducive to the prosperity and development of the national economy. Conversely, other proposals are likely to force some companies to move to other locations or close, which will lead to an increase in local unemployment and a drop in GDP.
3, Secondly, it is well known that carbon dioxide is a gas emitted when fossil fuels are burned and is one of the main causes of greenhouse gas effects and global warming. The greenhouse gas effect caused the earth's temperature to rise sharply, and the polar ice cap melted sea level rise. As a result, more storms and dry seasons on the earth caused huge losses. In addition, coal combustion releases sulfur oxides, causing acid rain, which can damage plant life and the food chain. Therefore, the adoption of new clean energy sources is a source of reduced greenhouse gas emissions and toxic pollutant emissions.
4, Furthermore, research can lead people to follow innovative strategies to reduce air and water pollution. We all know that air and water pollution can have a negative impact on the health of people in modern life. In order to protect the environment, people understand environmental protection knowledge is the top priority. So far, researchers are the most effective consultants, instilling valuable environmental concepts into people and inspiring people to collaborate on environmental protection. For example, researchers motivate people to ride bicycles instead of using cars while motivating companies to produce more environmentally friendly products.
5, To make long story sort, with all the above factors taken into consideration, our conclusion is the government shall conserve the environment better by funding research.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, well, while, for example, i feel, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 43.0788530466 23% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2311.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27625570776 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94993160854 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591324200913 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6938449865 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.55 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243406666877 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684088710331 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637763714773 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1235860384 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736845192158 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 86.8835125448 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.